• Member Since 15th Jun, 2012
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JohannSebastianBach


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Total Words: 12,624
Estimated Reading: 50 minutes

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What if villains are evil just because their subjects are? What if Chrysalis isn't actually evil, and that invasion wasn't her idea? What if she just wants some company, just like another pony?

This story contains *many* shotouts to my friend, and I wonder if they'll be able to find them all, should they read the story.
Also, if you don't understand why I mentioned that element, the "blots of color" in the park, don't worry. Everything will make sense later on. It's (kind of) a Checkov's Gun, and it's used to link this fanfic with another, which I'm still writing, and one day, I will eventually publish.
I had this concept in my mind for a while, and I finally managed to write it out. I am ready to receive hate, insults, and death threats for it, mostly because of all those sappy scenes.
Finally, have a piece of trivia: the working title was "Luna and Chrysalis do a scene totally stolen from Gangnam Style - AKA - Luca's Overly Saccharinated Imagination".

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The existance of humans is of public domain in Equestria. They learn from our cultures, read our books, watch our movies. But nopony has ever been interested in meeting a true human being. Until one day, princess Celestia decides this moment has come. Unluckily, the teleportation spell at long ranges is highly imprecise, and thus they don't know who's getting to Equestria. But that someone isn't going to regret it.

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First fanfic *ever* (AKA I've never wrote anything before that), be generous with constructive criticism. Also, English is not my first languge.
But! Don't let that make you act like sugar daddies. I'd rather read a honest comment that vehemently critiques my creation rather than a sugar-coated lie which is supposed to make me happy. Dear FIMFiction community, I trust you. Don't let me down.

I want to thank my epic friend, who gave me the bubblegum when I ran out of it, when I decide to write my fanfic. And by bubblegum I mean motivation. And moral support. And proof reading. And also the cover. If you're reading this, I <3 you!

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