2141522 could you possible proof read my fan fic?

ok, hey could you possible proof read my fan fic?

Oh, and thanks a bunch for the Watch! I really, really appreciate it, and I hope I can keep doing my best to deserve it.

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Do me a favor? If you want to "talk" to someone, the only way to be sure that they get the message is by hitting the "Reply" button on the message that you want to comment on. It is the little box in the top-right of each comment. It looks like two little arrows: ">>" If you hit that, it sends a notification to the person who made the original comment, letting them know you are trying to have a conversation with them. I'm glad that I stopped back, or I would not have gotten your message!

The O.C. looks great! You may want to use your computer's image program to flip it, though. It was fun flipping my monitor over so that I could see it, but I don't think most people would enjoy that as much as I did.

I personally do not, but you may want to check out some of the Pony groups on DeviantArt. Artists there often post if they have some room available for requests. Asking politely can sometimes yield results, too.

are you there by any chance?