So here I am, stuck on a story. Well, stuck on several, but that's not really the important part. There's one in particular that I have no clue what to do with. It's in desperate need of a re-write, particularly the first third or so, since the general consensus from outside sources seems to be that it's effectively unreadable in its current form. I intended for it to be a bit challenging, but it appears that I've pushed that a bit (a lot?) too far. I have to find an entirely new writing

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