I've put my first chapter to a few people and have gotten some much needed feedback. I'm rewriting the first chapter and temporarily pulling the story from the official submissions while I work through rewiring and fixing.
Any suggestions you might have would be much appreciated.

Yo! What the heck is up with the download versions?! I wanted to use the epub or txt files so my brother could help me with my story, but when I printed either one all the bold and italics text was normal. So I say again, what the heck?!

I need someone to help with minor story editing and who knows how to use/edit wikipedia. I'd like to get my FoE story out there a bit more as I'm going to be writing a LOT more on it.