A Troubled Mind In Troubled Times · 7:16am Dec 31st, 2014
Story Update
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I have nothing... therefore I am nothing. Revel in your darkness, for it is my light that made you blind. :3
Story Update
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Journal
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No, I'm not talking about my morning wood... that's still down. Also Chapter 2, shall be a bit longer as I'm fully writing it out still... oh my gosh was editing Chapter 1 Part 2 a pain! ... I think... no, no I'm not second guessing myself! It is fine, it is all... fine... the editing was fine... *Shivers*
Well I just thought I'd blog a moment about it as I am taking a break from writing while I search for... dun-dun-DUNN A new job... woo...
Update!!!
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Chapter 1 - Part 2 // Going to be a bit late... I am re-re-writing... I ended up deleting over a thousand-plus words and am back at the intro, or continuation of Part 1. I got flustered when I re-read it and said... this is a bit too much and over whelming and does not help curve in my story plot. So I am re-working it.
So I have now published my new story, although to see if it passes the test of the moderators. I don't think I'll have an issue with that or such but... you never quite know! O.O
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So I decided to unpublish my first story.. though it shall not be forgot! I just looked at it and said... you know, I can do better. That was the greatest part of looking at it... that I felt I could do better. I say as someone else has probably said before me... if you feel you can do better than what you have done... then why not do it, right?
Exactly that, I found I pushed the Chapter to quick, did not proof-read it enough or well enough.. as it may be. On top of that - as the writer I felt I not only jipped myself but anyone who took the time to read it. So, for now I shall leave the chapter up - A Weary Dream, Not much is changing in it except having it flow a LOT better than it was. On top of that I am going to be adding a bit more detail that I clearly left out in my late-night writing. Apologies to ANY who read it as it is
Well, I have gone and done it. After reading a few dozen stories, getting hooked on some as well. I have gone and started to write up my own. Have had this idea in my head for a while and I am going to be running wild with it. I hope not to many get upset at my story not following the cannon with pure accuracy. It is my goal to make the world seem blind to the violence that surrounds their nation & cities. The guards understand the violence, tend to try and hide it the best they can.