Oh-Okay, just uh... faint, right? O.o · 9:25am Nov 2nd, 2014
So I have now published my new story, although to see if it passes the test of the moderators. I don't think I'll have an issue with that or such but... you never quite know! O.O
Take a note here, I have decided to hold off on the second chapter, I have not even written it out on the site here yet... so UGH! I was trying to slam a lot into the first chapter so I had to back-off and be like... whoa, that is a lot for most people, including myself, to read in one sitting some times. You know, everyone has work and other things they want to do... so I figured I'd be a nice person and break the first Chapter into Two parts. :3 Maybe Later I'll combine it into one... but probably not because I like chapters that are anywhere from four-thousand to six-thousand words. More if I really get into the spirit of writing!
SO, yeah I am really hoping that someone reads this story and feels like being helpful on things they spot, that I may of missed. I am not perfect at writing and I am sure out of practice. *rolls-eyes* So, nervous... oh-my-gosh!!!! >.< I mean, I've had this story as well as my first story in the works of my mind for a while now... although it is still incomplete mentally... mostly in some of the characters that I've built. Although... I have done a lot of progress in my little note-book! >:D Paper and pencil baby! Who still uses that stuff? I do. *insert face-hoof here*
So don't be to angry if you like the first part and the second part of Chapter 1 takes a while to be pushed out. I am going to be making sure that I get it as good as I can. I really want it to feel like a good story, although I know a lot of people are going to go.. meh, it was... meh.... then say nothing and thumbs me down. -_- If you thumbs me down at least, pweaze! PWEAZE!! tell me what you felt was wrong in it. If it just was not your cup of tea then just say, not for me. :) It helps me understand if I am doing poorly as a writer or as a creative mind set. :)
Blah-blah-blah! Okay, done talking for now... >.> Off to uh.. count sheep? No, uhm.. count Stars? ugh, never mind that, I can't see them in the city here. Destroy... all... their? Base...? Yeah! :) Woot-woot!
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Lingling the Changeling!
