Jun
17th
2014
Re-Write of First Chapter from - When It All Came Crashing Down · 4:18am Jun 17th, 2014
Exactly that, I found I pushed the Chapter to quick, did not proof-read it enough or well enough.. as it may be. On top of that - as the writer I felt I not only jipped myself but anyone who took the time to read it. So, for now I shall leave the chapter up - A Weary Dream, Not much is changing in it except having it flow a LOT better than it was. On top of that I am going to be adding a bit more detail that I clearly left out in my late-night writing. Apologies to ANY who read it as it is now. :/ I give this promise here that I shall not do that again.
Apologies,
HeavensRaptor
P.S. - I feel cheap. :'(
