Soarin has a crush on Fluttershy, but he doesn't know how to approach her. Rainbow Dash intends to fix this, but she soon finds out that this will be difficult. She also falls in love with Soarin. Drama ensues.
... I was just kidding. Sorry about that. Didn't mean to spoil. Not sure if want though, that anime was emotionally scarring for me. I commend you for approaching such a delicate topic. Good luck with your writing.
Other then the constant wall of text that keep appearing in which case I would honestly suggest an editor, I'm seriously very, very impressed. So in a sense this will be a Fluttershy/Rainbow Dash/Soarin love triangle eh? Or will more romance be involved? If then AWESOME! If not then I'm ready to read either way, shit, you know how to write some very serious detail, I'm not sure which anime this is based off of but it looks really good...I'm down. Is this in the future so they are older or...what?
The first part confused the buck out of me but I pressed on, don't have much choice in the matter
The premise and focus characters are established well enough. The creative liberties you've taken with the story are unexpected but are very much welcomed. If it was going to be the same exact word-for-word story, with the original characters just being swapped with ponies, then I would stop reading here. This is fortunately not the case, and it serves as a nice distraction from the inevitable events that are to come.
But they will come nonetheless. Ohoho, yes, they will come.
No 'first' posts for anyone! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!
... I was just kidding. Sorry about that. Didn't mean to spoil. Not sure if want though, that anime was emotionally scarring for me. I commend you for approaching such a delicate topic. Good luck with your writing.
Other then the constant wall of text that keep appearing in which case I would honestly suggest an editor, I'm seriously very, very impressed. So in a sense this will be a Fluttershy/Rainbow Dash/Soarin love triangle eh? Or will more romance be involved? If then AWESOME! If not then I'm ready to read either way, shit, you know how to write some very serious detail, I'm not sure which anime this is based off of but it looks really good...I'm down. Is this in the future so they are older or...what?
The first part confused the buck out of me but I pressed on, don't have much choice in the matter
Well that...wasn't actually so bad.
The premise and focus characters are established well enough. The creative liberties you've taken with the story are unexpected but are very much welcomed. If it was going to be the same exact word-for-word story, with the original characters just being swapped with ponies, then I would stop reading here. This is fortunately not the case, and it serves as a nice distraction from the inevitable events that are to come.
But they will come nonetheless. Ohoho, yes, they will come.