Alright, gotta confess something, I went to clopfics because I had that feeling, and then I saw this story which intrigued me, and so when I thought that the 1st chapter was clop...no...it was something better, a story with awesome backstory and an awesome Princess to boot, defiantly faved, who knew checking for clop would lead to such satisfying(for me that is) story...but, you need to separate the paragraphs, but I concur,
I like this. It needs a bit of a touch-up for spelling and grammar, but it's good nonetheless.
thanks i try to keep the grammer correct but meh shit happens
this look epic but needs a little touch but other wise![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
thanks![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
2420890 why I can't find your story in my favorite list? not even in your story folder
um i dunno![:twilightoops:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightoops.png)
Nice story, but the grammar errors kinda glared into my eyes pretty hard.
yeah still working out the kinks![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
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If you don't already have one, get a proofreader.
Don't ask me I'm not qualified for it.
thanks i do what i can with what i have so ill try to do better![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
Alright, gotta confess something, I went to clopfics because I had that feeling, and then I saw this story which intrigued me, and so when I thought that the 1st chapter was clop...no...it was something better, a story with awesome backstory and an awesome Princess to boot, defiantly faved, who knew checking for clop would lead to such satisfying(for me that is) story...but, you need to separate the paragraphs, but I concur,
ONWARDS TO THE NEXT CHAPTER
So this dude is taking extra time to come back, since he should've been able to break out when Q, I mean Discord, did.
So this dude is taking extra time to come back, since he should've been able to break out when Q, I mean Discord, did.