Ehh? No comments yet?....meh all I got to say this certainly eye catching(ignoring HiE abundance) and hope to see more of this soon.

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was starting to wonder when someone would comment lol
you mean the abundance of HiE fics? yeah there are a lot of them, decided i'd had enough of reading second person, and started writing this. thanks for the compliment btw

Good read, looking forward to the next chapter.

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finishing up chapter 3 right now, and if it is up to snuff with my proofreader sneaky, then it will probably be up tomorrow afternoon, potentially late tonight though.

Fucking smartass

I loved this chapter it had me cracking up and it was a awesome read.I can't wait to see what happens next to them all.

This has the same issue some other stories have: using big words to make the story seem good, bit not taking into account how a character would act. It's not a wise decision to use the same tone and vernacular for every character, as it just sounds like an author is reading off of a script