This is AMAZING. I love the plot, how the little things can give me such a big shock, like how a world that revolved around six ponies in freedom can go into revolving around them in chains and numbers. The sophistication, how the one characters act, it's all just.. Wonderful. Keep it up, I am dying for more now.
2941193 It'll vary. It probably will turn out like my story "Conscious" where I'll make a 2nd chapter but then I'll get bored with how much work I put into it only for it to get no attention and then it'll die off.
I am working on the 2nd chapter though. I will finish this story eventually.
2941095 I have never received such a wonderful comment. Thank you. I really needed that and I'll try to continue as best as I can for you.
I will be on the edge of my seat for more, this is one of my new favorites and it's only just begun. You deserve praise, this is a once in a blue moon amazing story that you stumble upon and love, then end up forgetting how you found it.
Well, right now I'm regretting posting this so early.
Oh well.
This is AMAZING. I love the plot, how the little things can give me such a big shock, like how a world that revolved around six ponies in freedom can go into revolving around them in chains and numbers. The sophistication, how the one characters act, it's all just.. Wonderful. Keep it up, I am dying for more now.
How often are you going to be putting chapters out, because I am really liking this story so far.
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It'll vary. It probably will turn out like my story "Conscious" where I'll make a 2nd chapter but then I'll get bored with how much work I put into it only for it to get no attention and then it'll die off.
I am working on the 2nd chapter though. I will finish this story eventually.
2941095
I have never received such a wonderful comment. Thank you. I really needed that and I'll try to continue as best as I can for you.
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I will be on the edge of my seat for more, this is one of my new favorites and it's only just begun. You deserve praise, this is a once in a blue moon amazing story that you stumble upon and love, then end up forgetting how you found it.
am I ranting at you if I am sorry i love it btw
Kinda like the GeoVerse?
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Yep.
Only I don't know what mines about.
2942339 Head into it blind then. It's always more fun to write when even the author doesn't know what'll happen next.
Amazing.
I love it man, can't wait for the next chapter.
I'm enjoying this so far I'll be keeping an eye on it.
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Oh...
I thought it was the carnival of fear.
I don't know what heartless dick would downvote this awesome story.
Screw you, heartless dick.
Gives me an abandoned by Disney vibe.