Hmm, good start, but I will with hold anything really positive or negative till I see the story more flushed out. I follow with great interest.

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An understandable position. I hope that it provides you entertainment as I flesh it out.

Okay, I like this guy already. He's got a good heart and see the madness that is going on around him.

(And I too wonder how this all happened. What, did the Elements just go insane all of the sudden? Are the ponies of Equestria so bloodthirsty. It's too hard to imagine that a peaceful nation that doesn't even have much of a standing army and is so bent on friendship, start tearing itself apart and lower itself to such evils.) Celestia weeps for her country, tears lost upon madponies.

Keep up the good work.