Mr. and Mrs. Cake are out of town for the weekend during Apple Jack's big cider sale. It begins to storm, both Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie take shelter in their bakery.
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really pretty good story dude
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Hehe, awesome. I almost edited that part out
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Thank you for your critique
It's been a difficulty for me to describe things in too detail (within certain situations) without making the story drag. I spend a lot of time in the editing phase trying to compromise. Good to know I'm not imagining things... It's something I'm working on improving
Take it easy, pardner
wait , how does infantilisim factor into a fic that sounds like it's going the watersports route?....
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The fic has more than one element in it, but watersports could be added all the same depending on how a person looks at it.
3834457 ok so how does infantilisim develop this?...
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Thought I made it pretty clear in the story. Well, infantilism doesn't develop it, but it's an element in the story all the same. If you wish to continue discussing this, feel free to PM me.
Take it easy
3835492 i hadn't read the story yet that's why i was asking.....
I'm really enjoying this story. It took three chapters to get to the part I was interested in, but I wasn't bored at any moment.
The characters are believable and the flow feels natural, not a common thing for thees kind of stories.
Good job
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Thank you, that is quite a compliment
First of all blerrrggg that wetting scene was a bit graphic
Second of all you get five out of five faces
4553872 well this is a AB/DL story
Wonder if dashie will get padded