We follow the tale of an adopted circus boy, who is out of work, when an old friend extends an invitation for another form of entertainment. Sadly James is not without flaws, a mutant with an unusual ability...
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OK, to be quite bluntly honest here, you've jumped the shark with this. You've taken a nice idea (mutants in Equestria) and turned it into another "demon are cool good guys" anime trope crap fest. Why did you have to have Blaze be a demon? Why couldn't he be just a mutant?
I mean would Celestia allow a demon to be near her ponies? I would say that she would squash a demon flat and not blink an eyelash.
2864446 it just looks that way... for now. My true intentions will be clear soon enough.
2868825 What is Gary Stu?
2867382 Gravity bitch will be talked about later.
2869168 Can't spoil, as much as I want too, I will not spoil.
The story is rather interesting and I certainly didn't see this coming from something set in Gentleman universe. Yet this chapter was slightly over the top. I don't reject any of the ideas presented (far from it) but the way you wrote it is way too hectic (or not hectic enough - it would work better with either more order or more chaos). Still like and fav.
luv the story
got some minor grammar issues but nothing major that would make me pause.
really like this innovative story premise and can't wait for future updates
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I think it was just a different way of saying "Mary Sue". Someone, mainly female,whose implausible talents and likableness weaken the story.
Yep, LMessenger hit the nail on the head with this story.
Oh shade, how you troll
Dammit right!