Eh. I don't care much for clop anyway. I just wanted to see how bad you would write this . You wrote it as good as any decent clopfic that I read out of pure lack of fics to read.
I don't usually read clop and in all honesty didn't originally want to read this but im glad i did. This is wonderful! The only mistake i found was this thing here
presenting himself to him.
Herself not Himself. Unless Dash is a dude
This is very well written and you should probably continue with this for those lurkers that like Clop.
DAYUM...... that was hot....
Eh. I don't care much for clop anyway. I just wanted to see how bad you would write this . You wrote it as good as any decent clopfic that I read out of pure lack of fics to read.
Holy crap that was awesome !
The Pacing, perfect.
The details, perfect.
And the romance, perfect.
Absoluteness brilliant work for your first clopfic!
Quite spiffing if I do say so my dear sir
Can't help but to wonder of all the kinky stuff they're going to do later...
This was a good clopfic, especially to be your first one.
DAY'UUMM!!!
This is actually a really good clopfic. You have some serious talent, especially if this was your first.
I couldn't find this in your story list or mu favorites list for at least a week, am I so blind I couldn't find it, or did something happen.
2433289
Did you have the mature filter off?
2433289 The content filter is one of the original reasons I made a fimfiction account...
I'd personally love to meet a Brony with HLS* and force him to read clopfics.
*Hyperactive Libido Syndrome
I don't usually read clop and in all honesty didn't originally want to read this but im glad i did. This is wonderful! The only mistake i found was this thing here
Herself not Himself. Unless Dash is a dude
This is very well written and you should probably continue with this for those lurkers that like Clop.
nobody is perfect at writing...
I can only post this oh and sorry for other comment I deleted new to posting URLs
Two questions.
1. If changelings are meant to take love do they have instinctive sexual prowess?
2. Do changeling dicks have holes in them?
I always think of the weirdest shit on FimFiction