Pass or Fail
It was nearly evening in Ponyville as everypony finished up their work and were heading home for dinner, at Twilight's castle Scootaloo was in the throne room sitting in Rainbow's seat along with the others, she was really nervous right now not because of what she went through in the test, but if she failed cause if she did, she would have to wait five more years. Anyway, she was just sitting there on Rainbow Dash's throne chair quivering in fear, as she was shaking Rainbow Dash put a comforting hoof on her.
"Hey it'll be okay squirt, I'll still love you no matter what." she said with a smile.
"Really?" Scootaloo asked looking at her and the others, they smiled affectionately at her.
"O' course sugarcube, we'll always be your friends to the end, ah' don't care if takes you at least 30 tries." Applejack said
"It'll be okay Scootaloo, we'll be right here beside you for comfort when they come here." said Twilight.
"And if you pass, I'll throw you the biggest party ever!" Pinkie Pie said.
Scootaloo then jumped up out of the throne chair and into Rainbow Dash's hooves, Rainbow held her tightly as they hugged.
"You all are the best friends I could ever have." she said, this brought tears to Rainbow's eyes.
As Scootaloo was hugging everypony there was soon the sound of a knock on the throne doors, Twilight walked up and opened them and there stood two royal guards.
"May we please see Scootaloo?" one of them asked.
"Sure, Scootaloo the guards are here to see you." Twilight said, Rainbow put Scootaloo down and she slowly walked up to them.
"Come with us." a guard said, Scootaloo nervously followed them out the doors along with Twilight and the others who followed her to comfort her from being scared, once the guards reached the place they wanted her to be, they found Princess Luna standing there with a stern look.
"Ah, Scootaloo, we have your test results." she said levitating a folder that had her test scores in it, Luna opened the folder and began to read aloud.
"Your first test was a score of 89."
"Your second test was a score of 90."
"Your final test was a score of 96."
"It seems that you have......."
Suspense music started playing as the camera zoomed in on everypony, Rainbow was biting her hooves in fear, Scootaloo was sweating while biting her lip, and the other four stood with wide eyes, suddenly Luna showed a smile and turned the folder over for the others to see.
"Passed." she said, Scootaloo gasped and saw that she had made a score of 107 which was beyond it all.
"YA DID IT SUGARCUBE!!!!!" Applejack screamed out of joy.
"WHOO HOO!!!!!" said Pinkie Pie.
"I'm so proud of you Scootaloo." said Twilight.
Rainbow Dash picked up Scootaloo again and hugged her.
"I knew you could do it!" she said.
"Thanks everypony." Scootaloo said.
"Meet us back in Canterlot first thing in the morning." Luna said to the others. "We shall see my daughter become the first alicorn filly of Equestria." she said leaving with Scootaloo on her back.
"Will do Luna." Twilight said with a smile on her face.
Then she and the guards left for Canterlot, Rainbow watched with glee as she saw Scootaloo leave with Luna and the guards, but was soon approached by Twilight.
"Is everything okay?" she asked.
"I'm just so proud of her." Rainbow Dash said.
"Aren't we all." she said as she watched the night sky with Rainbow.
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yay a new chapter for this story i like it and i am glad that this story is incomplete now so you can make more chapters for this story
Stopped reading at the first paragraph just to say this, use periods. Run on sentences are bad. When the entire paragraph is one long run on sentence you have done wrong.
Rest seems fine, if a bit anemic, except for the paragraph on suspense which suffers the same issue.
same as wiiman.
sentences could've used a bit better structure, but other than that, a great chapter
a little short but I liked it
xd77 I got a question why is this story On Hiatus now and please reply to this comment on chapter for this story when you are online again
4741635 It's on hiatus so that I can have time to think for an idea for the next chapter.
4747090 ok and i hope you can think of an idea for the next chapter so the people that like this story can read it
(Sees plot of the story) wait wait waaaaait just a ding done second here princes luna of the frigen night adopts scootaloo!?!?!?!? what ever happened to rainbow dash????!!?!?!?
I will read this later.
xd77 i got a question where is the next chapter for this story
5493341 give me some time please?
5493346 ok, i will give you time
No new chapter?
5493407 give xd77 time just like this person said to me
5493346 how much time do you need to get the next chapter out for this story and sorry for bugging you about the next chapter for this story
5497659 As much as the eye can see.
5498494 what? i don't understand that
5498494 ?
5501505 i don't know what As much as the eye can see means
5501505 can you tell me
5501682 meaning as long as no one bugs me constantly.
5501725 ok and i am sorry for bugging you constantly about the next chapter for this story i just want to read the next chapter to what happens in this story
So let me get this straight.....Luna, as in THE princess Luna adopts Scootaloo?!
That has to be the most batshit insane idea ever......AND I LOVE IT!
YAY SHE PASSED WHOAA
6025081 That would sound wrong under different context eg she just died
5547448 You have a choice Dalek Armada or pinkamina make your decision
Y'know, I like the story, I just feel like it's rushed.
oooh the suspense!