I sat down at my desk in my new home, far from Ponyville, in the Crystal Empire. Levitating a quill and parchment, I wrote a quick letter to Twilight.
Dear Twilight Sparkle,
I don't know how it happened, and I would be telling you this in person if I could.
I don't want to alarm you but...
My dear twin, some how...
I am pregnant.
Sincerely your twin,
The Great and Powerful Trixie
.......................................................
Twilight dropped the letter after reading it five times over.
"No..."
"Twilight, what's wrong?" Asked Spike as he picked up the letter.
"T tr tr Trixie..."
Spike read the letter and stared at Twilight.
"Go."
"I can't just go!"
"I'll tell the others. She needs you. Go."
Twilight didn't need to be told twice. She packed a suitcase and bolted to the train station.
2346747 so far, likes have won for everything except Spectra.
Trixie...is...with foal.
You're damn right there had better be a sequel! For you to write those extra 155 words and then just leave it like that?
That would be too cruel beyond words. Please hurry with the sequel.
2507979 I'll get on it when I can. I already have the foal's appearance down. I could probably have gotten to it today, due to the fact I had no school, but I worked on Surprise instead. I also learned simple Chineese, and that was a fun way to spend an hour, so I've had an awesome day!
....That. Was a train wreck. Honestly. Everything had hardly any build up or set up.
Why and how did Trixie know Princess Celestia that closely?
It was more rushed than a Nascar driver late for work.
Pretty much all the moments for build up or anything of the like are instantly resolved.
Yeah. I'm done.
Have a good life.
-YBG
2540317 Usually I don't have a lot of time, so I rush To get thget done glitching
Sorry, keyboard is cluthing againAGAIN
Try to take your time when writing a story. The first rule to writing is patience.
2840401. Yeah. But this was my first story. (Posted here. The actual first composition is The Feeling) I've improved. And gone through lack of inspiration. And been without internet for a very long time.