This is quite awesome, as I have said many-a-times. Only real errors in writing still left, even after our pre-reading efforts, are mostly concentrated in the terminal entries, so we can probably let that slide for the same reason you need pre-readers
Im not a military type myself but Im pretty sure that calling someone who isnt an officer sir is a good way to het reamed out, so all this Sir stuff seemed a bit off. still an intresting start.
This is quite awesome, as I have said many-a-times. Only real errors in writing still left, even after our pre-reading efforts, are mostly concentrated in the terminal entries, so we can probably let that slide for the same reason you need pre-readers
2468076 Actually, I've decided to keep the errors in terminal entries. Ponies make errors, y'know.
Im not a military type myself but Im pretty sure that calling someone who isnt an officer sir is a good way to het reamed out, so all this Sir stuff seemed a bit off. still an intresting start.