People go missing all the time and are never heard from again. What if I told you that we've been to a place... a place with so much magic, it'll make your head spin. I'm talking the Magic of Friendship. And me and My cousin were there
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Hmmm…a part o me, wish that the spell didn't work (side effect of whatever is happening to him) and when Celestia ask him what did he remember he recall all but decided to play along for her sake.
looks like someone wants this awesome train to stop
Nathan has a horn on his head now? Or did Celestia put hers on his "man horn"?
Yeah...
Interesting chapter anyways.
2772519 Fuck! Hold on.
2773360 It was funny. I laughed for reasons in my comment. After all, Celestia does want in on his "fuckfest"...
So you end this on a cliffhanger knowing that death is imminent.
Next chapter is probably the one where he is going to die on the end. In which you will probably end it once again on a cliffhanger.
You can't cliffhanger a cliffhanger! The universe will go out of balance -,-
Somepony protect the fan factory
Snaked not snacked.
on,ringingmy hands through my hair.-> on, running my hands through my hair.Told not tolled.
But most importantly, First Person Omniscient... yeah reading anything from that perspective is awkward as hell and off putting. Especially when you restate things that just happened! Redundant writing is redundant. It's like listening to Newman signing about what he sees while you're watching the same thing he is.