I already can't bear reading this... I'm sorry, but you need to proofread your work.

i enjoy this, even though i don't know the first thing about hellsing

2082042 I agree. He really needs either an editor or at least a proofreader.

Author... you need to:
1 - Space up the text-pattern and dialog, to avoid the ''Wall of Text''
2 - Spell check an make sure that you use the correct words:
-There vs Their
-Here vs Hear
-Use vs Us
-Tin vs Thin
3 - Your grammar and sentence building in general could use some help too.

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It feels like I'm reading English with a Russian accent

2085087 I know, as I said before that I am a grammar nazi, and it would help if I had someone to proofreader it so if you or any person out there want to proofread any more chapters that are to come I would really appreciate it

With every swing that the chief made Alucard continue to dodge them and started snickering at the dog failed attempt. “Wow he fast, faster than I am at an all cake buffet” Pinkie said. “How is this possible? Judging buy Alucard size he shouldn’t be able to move that fast.” Twilight said trying to keep up with his movements. "That because he not like any normal human."

Another reason for alucard's impressive dodging is because he was trained by the patty cake champion himself

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How about an update sometime this year.

finally a good Hellsing fic

Are you ever going to update this godamn thing?

your grammar is delightfully bad.

Other than that i am really liking this, i want to see(read?) the face of the ponies when happy go lucky Seras eats

OHHHHH I can feel it coming the final release..... The Bird of hermes shall eat his wings and become tame so that the dead can dance and all of hell will sing

then they will see the Nightmares that would make even discord go cold with fear from. No all the world wil;l learn what true fear is in the face of the Walking hell that is Dracula and his watch Guard the Vampire Seras Victoria

an ork dog?

"WAAAAAAAAAAGH" Chief Bone-saw scream as he raised his sword above him, having one foot over Alucards corpse.

5236581 red ones go faster

5292521 STHEL RHEN!!! also I personally dont like the lack of Alucard or Anderson fist fucking these pony heathens......that is all.