Lol id be in worse shape then him my main next is a sweet amoe hore named darkmoon twin gatlings baked by revalvers and heavy cannon and missles in shoulder. i get in truble in drawn out fights lol
Armored Core & Ponies, nuff said. If you haven't played ACFA yet, you should. Shoulder-Mounted Grenade Launcher & a Shoulder-Mounted Gatling Cannon, everything dies, the end. And seriously, blowing up bigger-than-battleship Arms Forts is just too much fun. You ever wonder what its like to play hide and seek with 6 flying laser eyes? Well wonder no longer. Sol Dios Cannon ain't got nothing on those bastards. Also, excuse me while I kick you in the face with my 10 ton boot. GIANT MECHS RULE!!!
whoa, took me an hour to read through every game plot on the wiki. too bad i only have a PSone. the overall concept (human dies and goes to equestria) is quite old, but addition of a huge badass robots make this story spicy. i like it.
Apparently into an Empire that just vanished for a century,
Century = 100 years; millennium = 1,000 years. He was told that it vanished for a thousand years, so he shouldn't be getting that wrong.
You've also got several, glaring, homophone errors (to/too/two kind of errors, specifically whether/weather) and random capitalization errors. I'd recommend going back through all of the chapters and editing them for those errors.
Must...have...MOAR!!!!!!
Lol id be in worse shape then him my main next is a sweet amoe hore named darkmoon twin gatlings baked by revalvers and heavy cannon and missles in shoulder. i get in truble in drawn out fights lol
Armored Core & Ponies, nuff said.
If you haven't played ACFA yet, you should. Shoulder-Mounted Grenade Launcher & a Shoulder-Mounted Gatling Cannon, everything dies, the end.
And seriously, blowing up bigger-than-battleship Arms Forts is just too much fun. You ever wonder what its like to play hide and seek with 6 flying laser eyes? Well wonder no longer. Sol Dios Cannon ain't got nothing on those bastards.
Also, excuse me while I kick you in the face with my 10 ton boot. GIANT MECHS RULE!!!
whoa, took me an hour to read through every game plot on the wiki. too bad i only have a PSone.
the overall concept (human dies and goes to equestria) is quite old, but addition of a huge badass robots make this story spicy. i like it.
Love this story. Not enough mech fics around, and this one seems promising!
Rainbow Dash has a....
FAMILY?!
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Century = 100 years; millennium = 1,000 years. He was told that it vanished for a thousand years, so he shouldn't be getting that wrong.
You've also got several, glaring, homophone errors (to/too/two kind of errors, specifically whether/weather) and random capitalization errors. I'd recommend going back through all of the chapters and editing them for those errors.