The war against insanity continues three years after Obsidian's death, with the rise of a sinister cult.
Yay! New chapter!Also:
Deep inside, she ways wished she could have done more.
Always?
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I cant believe none of my pre-readers saw that.Thanks for pointing it out.
“The only pony I ever heard of being able to do that... was...” Twilight spoke, pausing for a brief moment, since this was still a very difficult topic for her. “Pinkamena Diane Pie...”
community.us.playstation.com/t5/image/serverpage/image-id/94311iE8F678AAC40AF610/image-size/original?v=mpbl-1&px=-1 If the Bloodclaw Cult is run by a blood-relative of the Pies/Cakes, we're in trouble.
I hope you're not planning on doing something TOO dangerous Twilight. *skeptical face*
“Wow, wow. It’s alright. We aren’t even keeping the elements of harmony anymore,”
I think that should be: "Woah, it's alright. We aren't even keeping the Elements of Harmony anymore."Hope that helps a bit.
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Well a bit. Its not really changing the message or fixing any gramatic issues.Its just artsifying it. Don't think thats necessary here.
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Sorry :(
2461209
Hey you might be my best pre-reader, but you are not the only one.
Been a while since i had a working computer so glad to see more chapters must read on.
Crystal Blossom...
Snow Drop...
Are they of a common thoughtline?
Yay! New chapter!
Also:
Always?
2450112
I cant believe none of my pre-readers saw that.
Thanks for pointing it out.
community.us.playstation.com/t5/image/serverpage/image-id/94311iE8F678AAC40AF610/image-size/original?v=mpbl-1&px=-1
If the Bloodclaw Cult is run by a blood-relative of the Pies/Cakes, we're in trouble.
I hope you're not planning on doing something TOO dangerous Twilight. *skeptical face*
I think that should be: "Woah, it's alright. We aren't even keeping the Elements of Harmony anymore."
Hope that helps a bit.
2451069
Well a bit. Its not really changing the message or fixing any gramatic issues.
Its just artsifying it. Don't think thats necessary here.
2450145
Sorry :(
2461209
Hey you might be my best pre-reader, but you are not the only one.
Been a while since i had a working computer so glad to see more chapters must read on.
Crystal Blossom...
Snow Drop...
Are they of a common thoughtline?