3062431 I know, I was remarking on the fact that Applebloom wasn't converted by Pinkie Pie, rather, the 'insanity' was there from the start and Pinkie Pie just nurtured it.
Obviously it stemmed from Granny Smith or Big Mac... Probably Big Mac, due to the fact that he is... a meat burger.
Dang, more Apples wiped out. Poor Babs and Applejack. Canterlot, eh? Very clever. That would be the last place one would suspect the cult's headquarters to be considering that's where the Royal Sisters reside. Oh god, not Big Macintosh! *crosses fingers* Please be out of harm's way...
Actually, with AJ's emotional breakdown. I would imagine she would be next to go insane.
Thanks for the error findings. All my pre-readers abandoned me without a warning. I have to publish the chapters unchecked for mistakes... But that one Ah is not a capital error. Thats how I try to interpret Applejack's accent, making her say Ah instead of I. Have done it countless times before.
Anyway, Despair is thinking in much bigger pictures as you may have realized by now. Are there more cruel things to do than to just kill someone? I can think of several things that are far more evil. Despair actually already displayed how much she can let someone suffer by killing off Babs parents and next to all of AJ's family members.
3076289 Yea, I think that's what her name was. I think she disappeared on a early chapter though, but the BloodClaw Colt have been around for ages so it may not be her...
Hmmm... oh boy... could it be Zecora...? I think she helped Obsidian with potions, but I don't think she was mentioned for very long in MI1. *goes deep in thought*
3076620 I'll be happy to point out the errors as the story goes along for you Nero.
So true... there are worse things than death.
I checked out every chapter of MI:TC, the images look cool. The 3-5 chapters really give me a shock... I couldn't be bothered going through every chapter of MI1 though because my connection speed is slow. (Takes a minute for page to load.) I seen all the spoiler chapter images, is there any I missed?
Nope, MI1 only had the spoiler images and thats it. The every-chapter-has-an-image thing was only in MI:TC and was experimental. Even though it looks great and adds a lot to the story, creating these images alone doubled the time and effort i need to write a chapter. I wont do something like this again in future.
3087312 3087558 I would imagine: If Spike died not knowing that it was Despair all along that tortured him and beaten him to death. Then in the afterlife, he forever hates the real Twilight who's begging for a never-accepted-forgiveness from him...
I mean: Someones heart being turn apart from the person illusion-ing as their love, can be one of the cruelest things I can imagine. I know the demons have him, it's just a scenario.
Hmmm... speaking of Spike, his soul was consumed by Despair wasn't it? I was just thinking that she would had probably annoyed Twilight by blowing his flames to taunt her. Despair can morph like changelings now after consuming Chrysalis. (One of my favourite characters too. )
I can actually imagine your scenario too Discord. Getting somepony to the point were they can no longer live and begging to put their pain and suffering to an end, can be very sad.
Huh... So... Apple bloom wasn't converted... Just... Nurtured...
You sick and twisted devil you... But then again, this is despair we are talking about here... Anything is possible.
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I dont quite follow.
How does AB come into picture here?
3060890 ... I must have missed something here... Is there someone else at the farm?
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Um... Applebloom died in MI1 if you remember.
Think closely. Who was Applejack living with?
3062431 I know, I was remarking on the fact that Applebloom wasn't converted by Pinkie Pie, rather, the 'insanity' was there from the start and Pinkie Pie just nurtured it.
Obviously it stemmed from Granny Smith or Big Mac... Probably Big Mac, due to the fact that he is... a meat burger.
This paragraph isn’t split properly.
So true. This is one of my favourite catchphrases from LoK too. Nice plot, I didn't think for once that they could be hidden in Canterlot.
Capital error.
I wondered if you posted, but the site hasn't alerted me by email... I have favourite you and following you...?
Despair is being a little too... ... ... kind isn't she?
I'll be worried if the Black Widow is Photo Finish. But I can't shake the feeling it is that rich mare in Canterlot. (Can't remember her name.)
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Granny Smith past away willingly. Plus AJ has been living with Big Mac since MI1 and I don't think either of them were infected by the curse.
Actually, with AJ's emotional breakdown. I would imagine she would be next to go insane.
Dang, more Apples wiped out. Poor Babs and Applejack.
Canterlot, eh? Very clever. That would be the last place one would suspect the cult's headquarters to be considering that's where the Royal Sisters reside.
Oh god, not Big Macintosh! *crosses fingers* Please be out of harm's way...
3074584 That's what I'm afraid of...
3074584 Are you thinking of Fleur De Lis?
I didn't think of Applejack.
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Thanks for the error findings.
All my pre-readers abandoned me without a warning.
I have to publish the chapters unchecked for mistakes...
But that one Ah is not a capital error. Thats how I try to interpret Applejack's accent, making her say Ah instead of I. Have done it countless times before.
Anyway, Despair is thinking in much bigger pictures as you may have realized by now.
Are there more cruel things to do than to just kill someone? I can think of several things that are far more evil. Despair actually already displayed how much she can let someone suffer by killing off Babs parents and next to all of AJ's family members.
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Yea, I think that's what her name was. I think she disappeared on a early chapter though, but the BloodClaw Colt have been around for ages so it may not be her...
Hmmm... oh boy... could it be Zecora...? I think she helped Obsidian with potions, but I don't think she was mentioned for very long in MI1. *goes deep in thought*
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I'll be happy to point out the errors as the story goes along for you Nero.
So true... there are worse things than death.
I checked out every chapter of MI:TC, the images look cool. The 3-5 chapters really give me a shock... I couldn't be bothered going through every chapter of MI1 though because my connection speed is slow. (Takes a minute for page to load.) I seen all the spoiler chapter images, is there any I missed?
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Nope, MI1 only had the spoiler images and thats it.
The every-chapter-has-an-image thing was only in MI:TC and was experimental.
Even though it looks great and adds a lot to the story, creating these images alone doubled the time and effort i need to write a chapter.
I wont do something like this again in future.
3076620 The only thing more cruel than death is bringing the subject to the point that they are begging for it, then deny them their right.
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Yes thats very cruel, but there are other things inbetween that i would also count
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I would imagine: If Spike died not knowing that it was Despair all along that tortured him and beaten him to death. Then in the afterlife, he forever hates the real Twilight who's begging for a never-accepted-forgiveness from him...
I mean: Someones heart being turn apart from the person illusion-ing as their love, can be one of the cruelest things I can imagine. I know the demons have him, it's just a scenario.
Hmmm... speaking of Spike, his soul was consumed by Despair wasn't it? I was just thinking that she would had probably annoyed Twilight by blowing his flames to taunt her. Despair can morph like changelings now after consuming Chrysalis. (One of my favourite characters too. )
I can actually imagine your scenario too Discord. Getting somepony to the point were they can no longer live and begging to put their pain and suffering to an end, can be very sad.