Heheh lovin the humour...
I noticed a couple a things this time. Just a couple I f times you missed some punctuation and formatting thingies, but nothing too crippling.
And how many times did you use the word "gear"? Yeesh that was impressive!
I have to say, i don't really see any MW/MLP Crossovers lately.. by the way you doeth , 'tis would be a success wouldn't it?
Heheh lovin the humour...
I noticed a couple a things this time. Just a couple I f times you missed some punctuation and formatting thingies, but nothing too crippling.
And how many times did you use the word "gear"? Yeesh that was impressive!
I have to say, i don't really see any MW/MLP Crossovers lately.. by the way you doeth , 'tis would be a success wouldn't it?![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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