Well, it's not bad. There are some good and bad things that I've noticed so far.
Spelling and grammar seems to be good, although don't take my word for it, it's not something I normally look out for. At least it's not obvious.
The, interesting thing is the characterisation. For the humans, all good. They seem to be well characterised. However the ponies, the mane 6, seem a little off. I don't really feel like they're the ponies that we all know and love.
I'll keep reading, but I'll hold on to the like for now.
Well, it's not bad. There are some good and bad things that I've noticed so far.
Spelling and grammar seems to be good, although don't take my word for it, it's not something I normally look out for. At least it's not obvious.
The, interesting thing is the characterisation. For the humans, all good. They seem to be well characterised. However the ponies, the mane 6, seem a little off. I don't really feel like they're the ponies that we all know and love.
I'll keep reading, but I'll hold on to the like for now.![:scootangel:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/scootangel.png)