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1895244 yes comrade... lots of vodka, tonight we party drunk ahah... actually that bad idea, last time I got drunk I started romance story and the results are this story
Yes unfortunalty it's over, as in everything, all good things must come to an end... well apperently not Joe and Scootaloo's relationship but that doesn't count
One part of me says that it was good that this wasn't kept in the story. But the stoner side of me says : I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. DOES JOE INVITE TOWELIE AND TOKE UP WITH SCOOTS, OR LIKE WUT. haha love this story dude, don't think I can explain how much.
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If that's the case, vet drunk moar, ya?
I loved this fic. Shame it's done though. There are terrible stories that go on for 100,000+ words . Oh well it was great while it lasted.
Ooookay that was totally random. Did Pinkie bring him to life?
This story is finished? aw well, just gotta say this is probably one of my fav stories of fan ficition now, I can't wait to see what you do next.
Well ladies and gentlemen sorry that I had to bring it to a close, I just didn't want it to painfully drag on because sometimes you have to cut it off before it gets bad just look at what happened to the alien series Alien: good for a first, Alien 2: amazing fucking movie then alien 3: terrible and shouldn't have been realeased, so I just wanted to make sure that this story didn't drag on. For now I think of new ideas, and usually it only takes a walk outside with a gun and even sometimes I'll just be at the shooting range, watching the empty brass casings flying out of a rifle and think... oh got a new story idea, so anyway thanks to all you readers who liked the story and what not
You know when I read over the story I remembered the final reference in the story, Schwarzenegger is a boss and Commando was one of my favourite movies as a kid
This. Was. Amazing!
1901816 Ohh yeah, gotta love the classics... if only they still made movies like this
who the fuck was that at the door i dont get it
1903896 he's the towel from south park he's so friggin gunny
1903988 that was fucking funny as hell i want to get high with him
hundred s of spelling, grammar, and syntax mistakes, a rough and obvious plot, a Gary Stu, and no real suspense. why did I Fucking love this?
1914368 Because uhm... not sure really, I uhhh never really write romancy love stories, I write action books so this was a first in the whole romance department and i have to say despite all the things you mentioned it looks like the story did well for itself, but I'm with you on this one, why was it an entertaining story. AND FOR CHRISTS SAKE WILL SOMEONE TELL ME WHAT THE HELL GARY STU WAS ABOUT, like really what is it or was it or whatever
Wtf no towelies espesaly in mlp
1914482 a Gary Stu is an over- powered character who's basically perfect. a.k.a. Joe
1920396 Oh I can tell you he ain't perfect, he breaks peoples... ponies arms just for standing in his way, though for good reason, though I can see what you're pointing at, he is kind of the goody toe shoes hidden behind the big bad ass
1930087 Ah the grammatercalist... okay you know what grammar... yeah anyway, I'm a redneck so I have a short vocabulary sooo yah can't really expect much in the terms of grammaraticalness... you get the point
1933791 Yeah, I liked that one too, and the finger motion thing
1946711 Why thank you good chap, i always find it strange how this one romance story did better than any of my other action stories. Come to think of it, I might do another romancy story but it'll have to wait so you know thanks and you know mustache
1968001 well I supose, but I think he said something about the branches breaking the fall, and how Applebloom would call it a big tree but it wasn't really that big... I just needed a reason for him to go to the hospital and have Scootaloo freak out thinking how it was really bad, and a tree falling on him is kind of bad so
i have enjoyed your story
and will now proceed to stalk you...
1993474 oh why... thank you
2002470 Uhm okay, I'll get an editor next time, err well next story I do anyway. Lot's of people saw 'Get an editor yer writing is killer' and I'm like 'I'm a goddamned redneck what do you expect of me'
2070507 Joe says "Careful the smoke can steal your breath" and Sgt. Reznov says the exact same quote when you are crawling through the smoke filled builidngs near the end of the game
I was enjoying this story so much.... the sex... not the greatest..... But the story involved makes this a raunchy comedy that is truly 100% memorable. I am bothered by sex too (though ironically I can read clop just fine.... more along the lines of talking and or writing about it bothers me) This is one of the only story where I am not checking the page number remaining (I read these stories on my Nook) to see how much I have left. The humor involved made it intensely enjoyable. I love Crusader stories like these and about 41 or 51 pages into it, inspired me to do a raunchy college story featuring the Crusaders. This story has a charm about it and the only potential negative I can give you is the cliched: it ended
I had some sarcastic comments along the way, but they were making fun of Mario's easy going attitude with the Kitchen scene. In today's society, that would get one arrested or charged.... I like Diamond spying on Joe and Scootaloo (I can't spell that term but I know what it is) making it priceless. I can totally see her doing that... Nothing sarcastic mentioned took away from my enjoyment and intended to glare in jealous reverence over the Chef's apprent ease of mares masterbating in their kitchen using cooking ware.
So many glorious spoons are wasted each year to sexually frustrated mares `
2182534 No not really, when I was in grade nine I was 6'1" and could easily bench 115, now I'm in grade twelve and am roughly 6'3" and can easily bench over 220 but I don't work out that much cause those bastard teacher's union said that me working out in the workout room would be extracuricular activities which is retarted... but I can see where you're going with how much he can lift and his strength output is (to put it bluntly) absolutely insane but that's what makes it awsome
2194716 if you want you can call me Evan. That's my real name and I don't mind people knowing
I kinda want to see how this would turn out. Sequal requested!
2260192 Thanks, here have a smiley face or maybe a kickass Spike
1895263 THEN DRINK MOTHERBUCKER!!
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Clop I can read with a lot of easy. Along with romance and sad story's like My Little Dashie. Those are the kinds I get my kicks at and its even better if there is human crossover from earth to equestrian in it. Those are my favorites. I CANNOT STAND GRIMDARK GORE FICS THOUGHT. I mean I could tolerate it mildly but after I read Cherliees Garden and the Scarlet Harvest (the sequel to Cherliees garden) I was like It was actually gagging at the story. The story was so dark and fucked up that I had to read an alternate ending made by someone else so that people could at least not feel so sickened. Cherliees Garden had REALLY good writing and plot but DONT READ IT. Its demented beyond belief
2326976 Yeah the M72 Davy Crocket. Not the most effective or wise thing, but it was COOL!
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Actually, that was the M-28 and the M-29, it was with the heavy mortar crews, and rather inaccurate.
Effective kill range of about a quarter mile, mostly radiation, and really almost impossible to get to actually destroy anything. The round weighed 76 pounds. Almost too little to reach critical mass, considering it was a fission device.
If we wanted to, we could develop a more powerful and smaller fusion based warhead with modern tech.
I hate reading so much, but this story was really good. I can't believe i read all of it in like 2 days. Best thing I've ever read. (And i'm not saying that because of the sex scenes(Ok, a little))
2340275 Thanks. You know I'm tempted to re-read this story because I've forgotten about it (How everything goes down). I kinda want to read it again... really badly... unbearably badly
This was a great story. But I must ask. HOW THE FUCK DID TOWELIE GET IN TO THE MLP REALITY. But still great story.
2384621 you'ed be surprised where towelie can wonder when he is high because they did need a towel
Dude I'm fucking crying right now that is too funny!
Just like the weird talking pigeon advert, the second that towel started talking I would have fucking kicked it and screamed like a little girl while doing so.