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DAMMIT ITS OVER
Vodka for excellent fic comrade
good story, have a stache!
Fuck, it's over. Damn dude, that was one hell of a story. There were a few spelling errors here and there, but overall, great read. Kept me hooked the entire time. This is the hardest part about reading, the ending D:
noooooo it can't be over. what happened to D.T after she got the snot beaten out of her.
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It's over, done, fin. *Sigh* Great story though.
That was kind of fast but I enjoyed the epic final battle and I enjoyed the double punch out that Sweeite and Apple Bloom gave Tiara at the end. When the fight began between Joe and the other stallions I immediately thought of this stage:
While I enjoyed the story and it was pretty good, but there was one big problem I had with it near the end of the story. At first the story was mainly about Scootaloo and her perspective, while I said that you should switch between perspectives more often, you actually shift the main focus of the story straight to Joe and pretty much stuck with him mostly throughout the story while Scoots' spot light in the story merely faded away. She's still the main character but she switched from primary protagonist to a secondary character instead of a supporting protagonist. It seems like you're just starting out on trying to make a dual protagonist story at the same time. Pretty much I think the ending could be a little better if it switched to Scootaloo's perspective and how she feels after Joe saved her. Either way the story is pretty fine.
And that's how g3.5 was made kids
WOW... That was good.
Enjoy every part of the story, like how the ending come along, and that part was funny.
out of
Keep the fics coming as I am a heavy reader
Nice bit at the end. That was a really good ending. I also loved all the Iron Giant references. Nice to see we share taste in movies. I hope you would make sequel that focuses on their lives after high school. But if not, that's okay because you've left it in a place where it would be okay not to pick it up. Kudos man, Kudos.
That ending.