Set back before Equestria was founded. Two different pony races fall for each other after an unfortunate accident. How will this affect them
Commander Hurricane!? More like Commander SHIT-HEAD!!
Poor poor Pansy, though it looks like (with an assist from Rainbow), she's going to have the last laugh
May God have mercy on Hurricane's soul... because Pansy won't...
I am sniggering at the thought of the combat general of the entire pegasus tribe cowering under a table to avoid having to talk to Private Pansy. Classic stuff!
306281 Hehe glad you enjoy it! I found myself having way too much fun writing up the tension between them.
306558 Hurricane is a big scaredy-cat with stuff like love. You are making me imagine horrible things that Pansy could do now. lol
306861 Hehe she probably got a trusty box she hides in like solid snake. Pansy approaching? Jump in the SAFETY BOX!
If we are going the route of the story of Heaths Warming Eve they did in the show... oh god... OH GOD...
WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO WHEN THE TRIBES MAKE UP IN THE CAVE!?!?
307478 That...good sir.. is something you will have to find out once the chaper is posted.
307023 "Hurricane, do, um - do you think that, um, love c-can bloom even on a ... a battlefield?"
309418 Hurricane looks around with shifty eyes before diving inside her safety box.
309530 "Hurricane? Hurricane? HURRI-CAAAAAAAAAAANNNE!"
ITS TAKING TOO LONG TO UPDATE! I NEED TO READ ABOUT PANSY KICKING HURRICANE'S ASS
323115 hehe it's almost done. Just try to relax until it comes out ok?
323643
Fine! I'll just have to resort to looking at this to calm my nerves...
fim.413chan.net/fim/src/131182187738-Rainbow_Dash_Pinkie_.png
Ahhh....
323737 It's so adorable and sweet I have been given diabeties.
326130 Thanks for the critique. I really appreciate it.
I hope you enjoy the story as you continue reading
Commander Hurricane!? More like Commander SHIT-HEAD!!
Poor poor Pansy, though it looks like (with an assist from Rainbow), she's going to have the last laugh
May God have mercy on Hurricane's soul... because Pansy won't...
I am sniggering at the thought of the combat general of the entire pegasus tribe cowering under a table to avoid having to talk to Private Pansy. Classic stuff!
306281 Hehe glad you enjoy it! I found myself having way too much fun writing up the tension between them.
306558 Hurricane is a big scaredy-cat with stuff like love. You are making me imagine horrible things that Pansy could do now. lol
306861 Hehe she probably got a trusty box she hides in like solid snake. Pansy approaching? Jump in the SAFETY BOX!
If we are going the route of the story of Heaths Warming Eve they did in the show... oh god... OH GOD...
WHAT ARE YOU GOING TO DO WHEN THE TRIBES MAKE UP IN THE CAVE!?!?
307478 That...good sir.. is something you will have to find out once the chaper is posted.
307023 "Hurricane, do, um - do you think that, um, love c-can bloom even on a ... a battlefield?"
309418 Hurricane looks around with shifty eyes before diving inside her safety box.
309530 "Hurricane? Hurricane? HURRI-CAAAAAAAAAAANNNE!"
ITS TAKING TOO LONG TO UPDATE! I NEED TO READ ABOUT PANSY KICKING HURRICANE'S ASS
323115 hehe it's almost done. Just try to relax until it comes out ok?
323643
Fine! I'll just have to resort to looking at this to calm my nerves...
fim.413chan.net/fim/src/131182187738-Rainbow_Dash_Pinkie_.png
Ahhh....
323737 It's so adorable and sweet I have been given diabeties.
326130 Thanks for the critique. I really appreciate it.
I hope you enjoy the story as you continue reading