"Has any pony figured anything out yet?!" Discord shouted.
"I'm sorry I couldn't hear you over MY excellence, so we don't know what your talking about." Trixie said. After she said that every pony started arguing. They argued for about ten minutes.
All of a sudden, the door swung open. "SHUT UP," King Sombra shouted, "ALL OF YOU NEED TO JUST SHUT UP! I chose you because I thought you could get along while we took over. Now, EITHER JOIN ME AND GET ALONG, OR DIE WITH THE PATHETIC PONIES."
Queen Chrysalis looked annoyed, "And just WHERE have you been? Seriously we've been sitting here trying to figure out plans to dominate Equestria, while you're out doing WHO KNOWS WHAT at WHO KNOWS WHERE!" All of a sudden a ball floated through the door onto the table.
"I was getting this." Sombra said angrily, "Look into it." The evil creatures looked and saw the six ponies journeying.
"OH GREAT, THEM!" Discord said angrily. "Ever since you broke me out of that statue, they're the only thing on my mind!" The ponies looked around curiously.
"Now calm down Discord," Sambra said, "One more out burst and you get a warning, then that warning will hit you after."
Trixie got furious, "And, WHY should we listen to you?" All of a sudden Sombra's eyes started glowing. A beam shout out of his horn, and a change ling blew up! Blood was everywhere.
"That's the warning for all of you." Sombra said obviously disappointing. "I have another thing to show you." The elements of harmony floated in.
Nightmare Moon's jaw dropped "We're a shoo in now, but how?"
"When you were still sleeping I jacked the elements, and then I woke you up." Sombra proudly said.
"But, I didn't see you carrying them."
"Because you were in front of me. Meeting's over. Get a good nights rest, we leave early." The ponies and Discord left for bed, but even they didn't know what was ahead.
Question
Is this a joke fic?
If not then its Sombra not Sambra
1850456 I know that...i fixed it. It's my first fan fic, and I'm just trying something out. So don't be so serious!
Sounds interesting.
1850511
Im not being serious I was just asking
BTW the title and the description still say Sambra
1850548 do you know how to fix that?
1850520 thank you, but do you have any advice?
1850555
Near the top of the main story page (the place where you look at all the chapters) it says edit.
Click it then proceed to change the title and description. Click save at the very bottom.
If you would like advice for your fiction feel free to PM me.
I'm a semi popular author so I can share a few tips
Happy Holidays
1850566 thanks you to could you please help me
1850579
I didnt understand that last sentence
1850566 i'm sorry but what is PM
1850587
Private message
go to my user page (click my username)
Then click the small envelope beside my name that should bring up the PM interface
1850597 oh ok i can do that
1850585 of my story?
1850606
I didnt understand
1850612 thanks, happy holidays to you too, could you help me with my story
1850671
send me a PM with what you need help with
I wont be your editor or prereader for long due to my other responsibilities