2052501 Thanks you again for feedback! Means quite a lot to me. I can say right now that Placidity is not really a fighter, but she has a very important part later in the story. As for the mare on mare part, I actually originally didn't intend her to even care about a sexuality at all. But things evolved, and sadly, I followed the cliche thing, as I tend to do when I'm ready to get rid of my writers block. Too late to change it now, so I might as well make it different in... Other ways. Very creative ways that will follow in soon to come chapters.

Ah, and as for the Shattered Ones... I am trying to make them seem a terrifying foe, when in fact they are actually just a group of bigot earth ponies trying to end the world. I'll be explaining much more about their goals, as well as be making them seem more realistic in a sense. Once again, I shall take your comments into consideration and make future chapters more reader friendly! Thanks again.