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Yay for fast editing and Mediafire!
1900493 Yay indeed!
...........Interesting............ More please?
1900514 Imagine writing it
1903654 I cant imagine what twisted dark mind that creature would have...
1916340 Read Dylan Dog, and get back to me. Italian comics at it's best (I am a Alan Ford fanatic, but not everyone like satire) http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dylan_Dog
1916384 Does Molestia approve of that author?
1916394 Let's just say Dylan Dog is Twilight Zone without the parental rating system, aka real scary, macabre and great stuff. Shame english translation is hard to find. Italian is the original. As for Molestia...
1916410 I can not read Italian and i dissaprove of him if Molly approves because... because apples are good dishwashers.
hmm...
1926008 Vore? Nah thanks.
Just read the first chapter. Will read more. Since this story is relatively new, and also now posted to EQAD, I strongly suggest revision. Your paragraphs are not indented correctly, you have some tense problems. Little stuff mostly, but it detracts from the reading experience. If you are having trouble finding what needs work, try reading it aloud and some of the mistakes will be clear.
I have only read one chapter, but this shows real promise. The premise is very unique and I like where it is headed... Dont disappoint me...
1940583 Always working to improve
When is update?
1941453 I am writing it right now (been busy with RL) so I am hoping tomorrow or the day after it, give or take. This next one is of the Clop category, and after that, I am hoping to begin Luna and Twi training!
1941573
HELL YEAH! I mean umm, yay
1941573
been a few days... however i think it will be worth the wait...
ps. after this chapter, can you try to update faster?
1953562 The chapter is just done! I only need to wait for my editor to check it and you can read it!
Hah, Derpy's eyes let her see "something" about Rainbow Dash because of the collar, the perception filter didn't quite work out...