Wow. New chapter 13 seconds after I read the first one. Go on

really interesting, apart from a few misspellings this is perfect.

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Here is to more! I am hoping to finish one more chapter, now that I got the whole system of Twi's perdicament down, today.

You. Are. A. Genius.

I am patiently awaiting your next chapter....well, trying to be patient

Nice job with finding a reason behing Vinyl glasses btw, kudos to you good sir.

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The story is really good, but it is one big wall of text. Everyone learns about this in their first story, including me. You need to space out the writting when they talk.

“I…I guess. I feel like I want to jump out of my skin, but I guess I am as calm as I can be in this sort of situation.” – Twilight said, visibly shaken by the whole ordeal.

“O.K. I guess you want to know what happened last night. First of all, I want to tell you that I am sorry.”
“What for? I don’t remember a thing.”

“Oh yes you do, it’s just that your dream is in fact your memory.”

“That can’t be true, I mean I did dream I was at your house, but my fur was white and I was …”

“Dryhumping the speakers?”

“Yes, that too… Wait, what?! That actually happened?!” – Twi said, as her face froze.

“Yes, Twilight Sparkle, that actually happened. And all the other stuff you said, you did in that “dream” actually did happen last night.”

You need to space out the lettering like this so it is more easily readable. If not the readers (As it happened to me) will find it difficult to see who is talking. Also when Bass cannon is talking (Not Twilight) you need it put it in italics so you know it is an eatheral being, like when people write about thinking. Hope this helps

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Oh ya, But i hope she become her old self, and her new self at night. like a persona.

1825920 To be honest, the ending still pretty much in the air. We'll see.

I'd love to meet Bass Cannon. I think me and her would get along just fine.

1828359 Still haven't decided. But I think it will be similar, at least.

1829991 what is vore?

1926008 being consumed by another entity (eaten, absorbed, etc)