I didn't really like the "her mind grew dumb". Poor word choice for me. Rather, something like, her mind was overwhelmed as it struggled and failed to process the sensory input of her body, or something to that effect. But to say her mind grew dumb seems offensive to that which makes Twilight, Twilight.
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1824063 Glad you like it.
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glad it wasnt deleted thank you
1824089 welcome
yay~
shit indeed
awesome can not wait for the next one.
Read both of these before but loved it. I'm down 100 percent for my favorite pairing doing the nasty
dude i looked for a spike and twi fic for ages! for ending my search you get twenty spikes!
I didn't really like the "her mind grew dumb". Poor word choice for me. Rather, something like, her mind was overwhelmed as it struggled and failed to process the sensory input of her body, or something to that effect. But to say her mind grew dumb seems offensive to that which makes Twilight, Twilight.
1824063 not sure if Soul Eater...