The six million Dollar mare
By Albert Shadowfax
It was beautiful day in Ponyville, Celestia’s sun was shining bright, and everypony was out enjoying themselves. Applejack took in a big breath and smiled. Now that apple bucking season was over, she could enjoy the day with her friends having a picnic in the park. She set off at a steady trot, enjoying the surroundings as she went along her way. It didn’t take her long to reach the park, and find where her friends where laid out on a red checked blanket talking and sharing gossip.
“Howdy girls, how ya’ll doing?” Applejack smiled and waved to everypony present.
Twilight looked up and smiled with glee. “Applejack! You made it!”
“Yup, me and big mac managed to clear off the last trees this morning!”
“Oh darling, you must be so tired!” Rarity exclaimed from her red sofa that she brought.
“Yeah Applejack, come get a cupcake and some punch!” Pinkie said with a bright smile as she held out a tray with all kinds of treats.
“Thank ya pinkie.” She politely responded as she grabbed a few treats off the tray, and began wolfing them down.
“Dang Applejack, you sure can eat a lot!” Rainbow dash smiled. “But not nearly as much as me.”
Applejack stopped eating and swallowed her food down. “Is that a bet?”
“Well I’m just saying that I’m better than you at EVERYTHING!”
“Oh I bet you are Rainbow,” Applejack responded sarcastically.
“I’ll show you!” Rainbow Dash exclaimed. She looked around for something to use to prove her skill, and spotted the train coming down the railroad tracks.
“I’ll stop that train with my strength!” With that she flew off towards the railroad tracks, leaving her friends sitting there.
“Ok Rainbow Dash, you do that.” Applejack responded nonchalantly.
“Uhh... Should we stop her?” Twilight asked nervously.
“Don't worry, Rainbow Dash can do anything.” Fluttershy answered with awe in her voice.
“Oh shit! She’s going to do it!” Spike exclaimed from behind a bush where he had been stalking Rarity. They all turned and saw Rainbow Dash bracing herself as the train got closer and closer.
“Oh hay! She owes me thirty bits!” Applejack exclaimed as she began charging towards the cyan Pegasus. “Rainbow, give me my money before you get splattered!”
“I left it at my house.” Rainbow dash responded as the train was less than a hundred yards away.
Oh hay, now I have to save her! Applejack thought bitterly as she raced towards her foolhardy friend. The train was only a few seconds away when Applejack ran forward and knocked RD off the tracks, but left Applejack herself in the way of the giant iron train.
“Son of a…” The train slammed into Applejack as full speed sending her flying back. Time slowed down for AJ as flew. The air around her was full of a strange red mist and junks orange body parts.
Everyone stood there mouths agape at the horrible sight before them, then Fluttershy vomited and passed out. Spike was the first to break the silence.
“Oh sweet Celestia! There’s a sale at Cupcake Corner!”
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Applejack’s body was laid out on surgeons table, being examined by multipliable doctors while Twilight and Celestia stood back and watched.
“Princess?” Twilight was trying to hold back her tears, but was failing.
“I don’t know Twilight.” Celestia responded softly. “I’ll do the best I can.”
One of the doctors left the table and trotted over to the princess.
“She is alive, but the state of her body is bad…” The doctors voiced trailed off.
“Is there anything we can do?” Celestia asked quickly.
“Well… the only way she will survive is by replacing her body parts, which would mean…” The doctor stopped again, knowing that they understood where he was going.
Celestia thought for a moment the said, “We have the money, and the technology to save this mare. Doctor, get in contact with my best engineers now!”
SHADOWFAX DEMAND YOUR OPINION FOALS!!!!
sorry my friend but...
no................
I lol'd.
Keep writing. I would like to see where it goes. And even if people don't like it, you should still write, as it calms the nervous mind, and there are some readers, like me, that like most to all fanfics. I also lol'd. Son of a... I was thinking gun. lol. Im a tf2 brony.
Bring me my best engineers!!!
*enter the engineer*
*pause*
Engineer: Well don't that just beat all.
i would do it, but do without the...how should i put this. complete and utter randomness, such as the only reason aj saved dashie is the fact that she owed her money
Way too short.
Give me some more.
read cause of the description:
"One beautiful day is ruined when Applejack is hit by train and is taken to the hospital."
Yeah, don't you hate it when that happens, ruins my day all the time.
Gentlemen, we can rebuild her. We have the technology.
*Applejack gets rammed by a train and parts of her body are splattered everywhere*
“Oh sweet Celestia! There’s a sale at Cupcake Corner!”
I can't... I can't breathe!
Don't you think it's weird that hospitals can turn people into robots but can't do other stuff like cure cancer? And when you think about it... where'd they get that kind of technology?
I SHOUT FOR MORE! MOAR!
Longer chapters, too, please.
*reads description*
She said "I like trains"
132120 Aren't we all TF2 bronies?
132208 Lol IKR!!
132184 Don't worry brony, this was da Prologue.
132331 Aliens duh!
132367 My next chapt. Is going to be for PonyBorn.. So this one won't get a new chapter for a week... maybe
132438
Oh.
132438Oh, I could've sworn it was the illuminati, but your theory makes sense too. Does Nostradamus appear in your dreams as well? (I hope so, because if not, then that means I'm going crazy! Either that or I'm the chosen one. Which ever comes first.)
133371 Nope your just crazy!
133386We'll all find out when 12/21/12 comes around...
I completly forgot about, I got a punch of responsablitly and it knocked me oit.. for two years!