Dang, I imagine it is pretty difficult to do a stream of consciousness story like this well, but you definitely did it, and you did it in a way that is at the same time so unlike the show, but so true to Pinkie Pie... if that makes any sense to you.
(also I really hate to be that guy, but in all of your stories you say Sugarcube Corners, the actual name is Sugarcube Corner, without the plural)
Very nice job with the stream of consciousness. It really amplifies Pinkie's distress and fears and reads very much like what one would expect from delving into her mind. Here's hoping the other character studies are just as good.
Dang, I imagine it is pretty difficult to do a stream of consciousness story like this well, but you definitely did it, and you did it in a way that is at the same time so unlike the show, but so true to Pinkie Pie... if that makes any sense to you.
(also I really hate to be that guy, but in all of your stories you say Sugarcube Corners, the actual name is Sugarcube Corner, without the plural)
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Very nice job with the stream of consciousness. It really amplifies Pinkie's distress and fears and reads very much like what one would expect from delving into her mind. Here's hoping the other character studies are just as good.
hey that was something deep man i haven't thought of something so hard before.
Freaky good.