This one pissed me off. And don't get me wrong, great fic, excellent phycological profile on the characters. What pisses me off is that Fluttershy doesn't considers herself to be worth something, you could be a dead beat and still have value, what made it worse was that it was her own mother teaching her that! Mothers are supposed to protect you, nurture you, give you a moral code to live by, push you to go for what you want, not make you feel worthless. If I haven't written in your previous chapters it because those are a more common place problem, for me anyways, I have yet to meet a mother that would not tear hell in half to make sure there kids grow up fine and they have some awful kids.
I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you
This one is easily the most terrifying one for me thus far. At least Pinkie knows that her thoughts are twisted and wrong. The fact that Fluttershy doesn't is what makes this whole chapter so chilling.
'mother' is always used as a proper noun in this chapter, so it should always be capitalized.
I'm starting to get an over-the-top, trashy soap opera vibe now. One character having ridiculously abusive parents is one thing, but two characters? (I'm referring to a character from a different story in the same continuity here)
6663439 It's hardly trashy soap opera, mainly because a surprising number of people {And ponies} are abused, so having just two so far is surprisingly normal.
such detail. :)
Fluttershy's abused? is this some sick, twisted joke? great fic though, five moustaches
This one pissed me off. And don't get me wrong, great fic, excellent phycological profile on the characters. What pisses me off is that Fluttershy doesn't considers herself to be worth something, you could be a dead beat and still have value, what made it worse was that it was her own mother teaching her that! Mothers are supposed to protect you, nurture you, give you a moral code to live by, push you to go for what you want, not make you feel worthless. If I haven't written in your previous chapters it because those are a more common place problem, for me anyways, I have yet to meet a mother that would not tear hell in half to make sure there kids grow up fine and they have some awful kids.
I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you I hate you
This hurts just as much as the first time
This one is easily the most terrifying one for me thus far. At least Pinkie knows that her thoughts are twisted and wrong. The fact that Fluttershy doesn't is what makes this whole chapter so chilling.
'mother' is always used as a proper noun in this chapter, so it should always be capitalized.
OK, time to set up a "hug an EoH charity" now.
The fact that I'm reading this for the first time the day after watching a rescreening of Psycho is horribly fitting.
I'm starting to get an over-the-top, trashy soap opera vibe now. One character having ridiculously abusive parents is one thing, but two characters? (I'm referring to a character from a different story in the same continuity here)
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It's hardly trashy soap opera, mainly because a surprising number of people {And ponies} are abused, so having just two so far is surprisingly normal.