I am so worried about my ponies right now...

This story has been reviewed by the The Equestrian Critics Society

Story Title: Kaleb's Critters

Author: CompleteIndifference

Reviewed by: Charelzzz

Kaleb’s Critters is a science fiction Human-In-Equestria story which at the time of this writing is incomplete. This review will cover the 19,000+ words of the first eight chapters of this story. Due to horrifically casual violence and crude language, it is recommended for mature readers. The style is very well suited for a science fiction tale and the human characters are well developed through action and dialog. The author does a fine job of making you feel sympathetic towards the protagonist, a thoroughly likeable down-on-his-luck Inner City engineer who manages to land a job at “The Channel” as a cameraman on an extra-terrestrial wildlife show, Kaleb’s Critters. Robin feels rather like a Larry Niven character, and the world he lives in is as awful a dystopia as one could hope for; he is a human being living in a spectacularly inhumane world.

Score: 8.4/10

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