This story is fantastic, I'm surprised that this has not received more attrition then it has already. The way you depict emotion is just unbelievable on how deep of a impact they have, from joy to a void of absolute darkness with nothing but dread and despair that bring on a sick feeling within that almost seems like pain but is not.
The character development is great, a bit mysterious and definitely surprising at times, but good overall. The plot is good so far and very entertaining, though dark but still a pleasant read non the less. Definitely like the situation that is going on between Luna,Celestia and Dust, for you can go many ways with this, hell I wouldn't be surprised if there is some kind of reference to "fight for the new luner republic" type of deal in here.
The only problem I have with the story is a grammar or spelling error that slips in know and then, but other then that your set. Though I still think this should still have more votes or comments,it truly is a same on how most good story's can go completely under the radar, be under appreciated ,or avoided for very minor details and its disturbing on how many people can act so harsh or bias on this fandome, but then again it is still young compared to other fandomes that have been around for ten to twelve years, oh well in do time.
Anyways that is all I have to say and shall be waiting for your next chapter to be released.
This story is fantastic, I'm surprised that this has not received more attrition then it has already. The way you depict emotion is just unbelievable on how deep of a impact they have, from joy to a void of absolute darkness with nothing but dread and despair that bring on a sick feeling within that almost seems like pain but is not.
The character development is great, a bit mysterious and definitely surprising at times, but good overall. The plot is good so far and very entertaining, though dark but still a pleasant read non the less. Definitely like the situation that is going on between Luna,Celestia and Dust, for you can go many ways with this, hell I wouldn't be surprised if there is some kind of reference to "fight for the new luner republic" type of deal in here.
The only problem I have with the story is a grammar or spelling error that slips in know and then, but other then that your set. Though I still think this should still have more votes or comments,it truly is a same on how most good story's can go completely under the radar, be under appreciated ,or avoided for very minor details and its disturbing on how many people can act so harsh or bias on this fandome, but then again it is still young compared to other fandomes that have been around for ten to twelve years, oh well in do time.
Anyways that is all I have to say and shall be waiting for your next chapter to be released.
Also, DEMON POSSESION!!!!!
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I feel like it's Nightmare Moon!
And sudden Tyrant/Racistlestia, great.