1676812 Easy way to tell if you are a threat. It reveals everything about you since most ponies live innocently its like she needs to catch up with the many years you spent outside of her influence. I can honestly imagine Dexter going "OH fuck me sideways!" at that little expose. I just want to see how this will play out.
1677011 Well it's not like he is outright mean/evil or whatever..... sure he has a thing of killing murderers..... but..... maybe Celestia will look past that.... or not. Sort of depends on what her mindset is in this universe.
1677267 Or if you flow this way. Celestia cures his Psychopathic qualities. Or he escapes somehow. There are alot of ways to make this work. Just depends on the author.
1677337 You gotta imagine though Where would he fit in in a place that has low crime level and nothing on the levels of what we have here on earth? I mean Gilda steals an apple and flips her shit and nobody gets her to pay for whatever she had done.
I really hope you continue with this. I can just imagine this playing out like a proper episode of Dexter.
Though, for next chapter, please fix the spelling errors, you can do that in any basic word document program, and also, one question, what's going on with the speaking quotations? They should be like "this" but yours go upside down like „this“. I've seen that before, not sure what it is though is it from another language?
The only thing I don't like is Fluttershy referring to him as a pet. They scarcely do that for other creature that can talk, and he has proven himself quit sentient, so I'm not sure, maybe It's just a personal thing, cause I wouldn't ever call a talking animal a pet.. but again, that's just me.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. It's great. I love it when mature things are crossed over with innocent things, and they work together.
How will Dexter get out of this? You'll need to be clever, and I know you can. Please do continue, thumbs up all the way.
I'm not familiar with Dexter's personality as I don't watch the show, so I don't know if this is just him being in character or a grammar mistake.
This is surly a mistake.
Also... Mind reading?
Great chapter, you've got my attention for now.
Why is reading the mind of the human in Equestria one of the favorite past times of Celestia in lots of HiE fics?
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Easy way to tell if you are a threat. It reveals everything about you since most ponies live innocently its like she needs to catch up with the many years you spent outside of her influence. I can honestly imagine Dexter going "OH fuck me sideways!" at that little expose. I just want to see how this will play out.
1677011 Well it's not like he is outright mean/evil or whatever..... sure he has a thing of killing murderers..... but..... maybe Celestia will look past that.... or not. Sort of depends on what her mindset is in this universe.
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Or if you flow this way. Celestia cures his Psychopathic qualities. Or he escapes somehow. There are alot of ways to make this work. Just depends on the author.
1674648 And here's what happens when you mix the 2 together: geekologie.com/2010/02/17/dexter-dexter-mashup.jpg
1677300 He's like a good psychopath...... if there is even one that can be good.....
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You gotta imagine though Where would he fit in in a place that has low crime level and nothing on the levels of what we have here on earth? I mean Gilda steals an apple and flips her shit and nobody gets her to pay for whatever she had done.
1677352 Killing gryphons?
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Not so cut and dry but perhaps make him like the secret weapon of the Equestrians
Interesting ideas are here.
I really hope you continue with this.
I can just imagine this playing out like a proper episode of Dexter.
Though, for next chapter, please fix the spelling errors, you can do that in any basic word document program, and also, one question, what's going on with the speaking quotations? They should be like "this" but yours go upside down like „this“. I've seen that before, not sure what it is though is it from another language?
The only thing I don't like is Fluttershy referring to him as a pet. They scarcely do that for other creature that can talk, and he has proven himself quit sentient, so I'm not sure, maybe It's just a personal thing, cause I wouldn't ever call a talking animal a pet.. but again, that's just me.
I thoroughly enjoyed this. It's great. I love it when mature things are crossed over with innocent things, and they work together.
How will Dexter get out of this? You'll need to be clever, and I know you can. Please do continue, thumbs up all the way.
1686154 Oh thanks!
Yes, in my language the quotation marks go upside down. i will write them this way in this fic.
So thank you again for yor opinion.
On Friday i'm posting new chapter.
It's cool, don't really care about the grammar, and its got my attention. Good show ol chap jolly good show.
Pot calling the kettle black, much? Seriously Dexter, you're a scientist in a room full of cops.