Oh Sithis, this one was actually hot.*the shame* *the boner* *the shame boner* Curse you Exolief! Joke, good chapter, now if you'll excuse me I'll be in the bathroom.
1774853 For a normal maze, yes. Keep in mind, though, this is a "what if" scenario(as detailed in the very first part of the story), and a few things are already changed. Secondly, what's to keep Discord from altering paths as they go to effectively keep them all running in circles, or just not reaching the center unless he WANTS them to? In fact, I think he did just that IN the episode itself, altering the paths to his whims in order to force the cast to fall into his traps before allowing them to "regroup".
1774670 I always thought it was just a garden that had been made INTO a maze.If I'm wrong, then yes, my apologies.
It could be worse, I could point out any of the spelling/grammar/punctuation errors you make.
Feel free to do so, if you wish. I've looked over them on my own and with a friend, but there are still times when I might occasionally slip up.
1774773 No, that's how I chose to word it She's forced to hate herself, really.
1774788 In the show, the "elements of harmony" refers to a lot of things. It refers to the bearers, the pendants, and the elements themselves. In this case, every character (pre-Twi, of course) was distracted by something that reminded them of their cutie marks instead of their elemental pendants, which weren't in the maze to begin with. At least, that's how I see it
1774853 Just because he blocked off the entrance doesn't mean he can't just up and make a new one. Everything impossible is a finger snap away for Discord
And no, I don't need an editor. I thank you for offering, but I'm good. I did my best to be show-accurate SOMETIMES, but it's not really the intention for a twisted, ENTIRELY HYPOTHETICAL clopfic
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Mouth hugs. That is all.
>Rainbow Dash
>Mouth Hugs
>Cum Fetish
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MOAR!
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When will Twilight come out???
BEST ELEMENT NEXT! I can't wait! I hope my fav pony puts up a good fight though!
Rainbow Dash addicted to sucking? There is only one word for it...
If somebody missed it, read YukoAsho's Suck too
Oh Sithis, this one was actually hot.*the shame* *the boner* *the shame boner* Curse you Exolief! Joke, good chapter, now if you'll excuse me I'll be in the bathroom.
Going back to Yuko's "Suck" story are we? Nice choice.
only two left.
1735317 Here is the full pic, but be careful, it's NSFW.
1774057>>1774226
Yes. This.
I cannot highly recommend 'Suck' by YukoAsho enough. It is indeed one of my various fetishes
1774853
For a normal maze, yes. Keep in mind, though, this is a "what if" scenario(as detailed in the very first part of the story), and a few things are already changed. Secondly, what's to keep Discord from altering paths as they go to effectively keep them all running in circles, or just not reaching the center unless he WANTS them to? In fact, I think he did just that IN the episode itself, altering the paths to his whims in order to force the cast to fall into his traps before allowing them to "regroup".
1774670
I always thought it was just a garden that had been made INTO a maze.If I'm wrong, then yes, my apologies.
Feel free to do so, if you wish. I've looked over them on my own and with a friend, but there are still times when I might occasionally slip up.
1774773
No, that's how I chose to word it
She's forced to hate herself, really.
1774788
In the show, the "elements of harmony" refers to a lot of things. It refers to the bearers, the pendants, and the elements themselves. In this case, every character (pre-Twi, of course) was distracted by something that reminded them of their cutie marks instead of their elemental pendants, which weren't in the maze to begin with.
At least, that's how I see it
1774853
Just because he blocked off the entrance doesn't mean he can't just up and make a new one. Everything impossible is a finger snap away for Discord
And no, I don't need an editor. I thank you for offering, but I'm good. I did my best to be show-accurate SOMETIMES, but it's not really the intention for a twisted, ENTIRELY HYPOTHETICAL clopfic
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I'm thinking either later today, or tomorrow. Probably the latter
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Only got one chapter left to post. Twilight and then it'll be all done with
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Oh really, i was looking forward to some cazy alicorn stuff. Give it all a sense of finallity. But twilight is cool
Have a good one
1776144>>1776979
Wasn't in the plan and I don't really have an idea for it. It sure would be nice, though
1775305
Thanks!!!
1777298cool!
Nice little ficlet. Really doing a good job selling the whole mind control thing. Masterful.
I seriously love this story. Write more like it please!!
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