“Hey Rainbow Dash!”
“Hmm? Oh hey Twilight! What are you doing up so early?” I yawned, stretching my wings as I wake from my cloud nap.
“I just got a letter from Princess Celestia! She says you’re needed in Canterlot”
What does she want? We hadn’t spoken to each other since I’ve came back to Equestria nearly three years ago. I forgive her though, how couldn’t I? Here is where I belong. And yet...
“Rainbow?” Twilight calls out again. “you zoned out”
I did?
“Yeah yeah, I’ll go”.
I hopped up from my cloud, and flared my wings into the wind.
And off I went. Flying is so different here. The pegasi controlled weather makes it too... boring. I miss fighting with unpredictable thermals, sudden updrafts, storms that come and go without warning. But the predictability does make it easier to-
I arrive in Canterlot, stepping back into the castle for the first time for years. I stop at the threshold, suddenly overcome with emotion. Can I really go face her? The choice was taken away from me when the door opened.
“Hello Rainbow Dash” Celestia’s elegant voice rang out.
“Princess” I tonelessly managed.
“Tell me Rainbow. If you could go back to Earth, would you?” She said, her tone unidentifiable
I had thought about it. but as the days passed, I lost hope. A year there was only a day here. Even if I could, it’s been long enough for the world to be unrecognizable.
“No; what’s the point? He’s been dead for centuries.” I said, defeated, trying my hardest not to tear up. Did she bring me here just to reopen old wounds? No, that’s not her style. I know she cares about every one of her subjects, but at that moment, I could only feel pain and anger.
“I wouldn’t be so sure Miss Dash, in fact, there’s someone I want you to meet.”
Now I was confused. What does she mean? Did some egghead unicorn make a portal spell? Where the universes merging because of some accident? Did-
“So Celestia, are you going to introduce us or do you enjoy keeping people waiting?”
I froze. I knew that voice. It couldn’t be.
“D-d-daddy?”
The End
A/N: In case you haven't realized, this is an unofficial sequel to My Little Dashie. Some lines were taken verbatim from ROBCakeran53's story, put into a new context. Funfact: The title is an anagram for My Little Dashie Two.
As my first published story, please feel free to comment on my formatting and grammar and tenses and whatever...
Verily!
Sir Nyan of Canterlot
Update 11/23/2012: I will continue the story, starting from the end of My Little Dashie (my interpretation), if there's enough interest. Thanks for reading!
I thought this was going to be good.
Boy, was I ever wrong.
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I liked it. But one thing bothered me... I'm not a fan of My Little Dashie, you see. I don't hate it, but it's not my cup of tea. Your sci-fi story is my kind of thing, and when the ending came out of nowhere... Ack!
But your writing is crisp and fun. Out of curiosity, besides My Little Dashie, were there other inspirations for this?
I don't know what to say...
Like Kolwynia, I hated My Little Dashie, but this. THIS! THIS IS GREAT!
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I wanna stay here all day.
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Intro to story universe, will continue if enough people want to.
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Go on if you wish. I personally didn't like this much. But eh. Others seem to have, so go on! Do it!
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Thanks! I was going for a complete swerve, but if I continue the story I plan on making a straight sci fi, what happened in the thousand years between My Little Dashie and his death.
I...
This...
Is actually really fucking good. Granted you are piggy-backing off of MLD a little bit, but 90% of it is completely original, so kudos. Very original story for an MLD sequel (not that I've read many...)
Of course, I might be partial to this because the protagonist is a crotchety old man, and it's written in 1st person present tense, reminds me of a certain other fic Why the hell is chapter 2 in past tense though?
But hey, you had me literally busting out laughing when he told Meghan to 'go hack a turd' and you just about had me in tears towards the end of the 1st chapter and again at the end of the 2nd. Though I get the termination thing, you were kinda vague about it. I didn't get the whole asteroid thing.
But yea. Fav'd. Thumb'd. Love'd. Hell, I'll even give you a watch, just in case you write something else awesome. You should like, totally watch me too. Though I'm not sure you should do a sequel to this. It's great by itself.
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