Alicorn OCs ahoy!

I don't know what the deal is with Alicorn OCs; they seem fine to me. This seems like a neat concept, but sounds a bit too dark for my tastes. The only kind of dark fics I like are grimdark horror fics.

I don't really have an opinion about Alicorn OC's, just that they seem a little... I don't know, like bragging, but not really.

Bit to grid for my tastes, I won't rate this so it won't go down in stars.

NOOOO!!! thats so Disturbing

FlutterShy!!! NOOOO!!!!

Celestia would have swapped places with fluttershy if she could

FLUTTERSHY...NO!!!!!!!

THIS.. FIC..NEEDS.. A CONCLUSION.

But, on the other hoof, THE WRITING IS BRILLIANT!

Is this a sequal to Rise of Tambelon ? Curious . Very good writing 5/5 stars. But why?! Why!? Not Fluttershy!?

Should be rated mature.

Very well written, and the idea is fresh for once, see way too many repetitive stories and this is defiantly new! Tracked would like to see more!

Though I do agree it should be rated mature, it is rather graphic and it has some very adult themes in it.

I was just thinking about the rating. I do agree, it should be mature. I'll go fix that.

No, this story has nothing to do with my other story.

I have to tell you, Sunstar, that this is your darkest writing yet.

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My mood was dark when I came up with the idea for this. Thanks, Battlefield.

Hang on a second..... In the Picture Theres Alicorn version and Normal Solaria
The normal does not have wings or a Horn
the Alicorn one has Wings and a Horn
And the Cutie marks are different!
A PONY CANT HIDE HER HORN WINGS AND CUTIE MARK WTF!!!!!!!!!!11
Anyways...... That was disturbing like i said before

please tell me theres going to be more of this story its actaully quite good.,

There will be more, lots more.

It is possible to hide your horn and wings through the use of magic. The only problem is that it makes them invisible, but they can still be felt by others. This idea came from Lunacat, a dear writing buddy of mine in her story, Worlds Apart. The cutie mark is a little different. In this case, it has to do with how light is bent around the mark which makes you see something else instead of the normal mark. Blueblood will be explaining it much better in the new chapter.