It had been a week since that day I remembered Fluttershy. Those days of that week had been excruciating.
The first day when I tried to watch the show I just couldn't handle the thought of watching her, and after I had turned the television off I sat on the couch murmuring to myself about how foolish I was. First I was sad, but anger then infused within me so abruptly that I threw the remote with intense might and it caused a dent on one of my walls. I don't know why I did it, but in a way it sort of helped calm me down.
The second day I didn't go to work again, although I had my boss know why I was absent; I told him I was sick, plain and simple. Of course I didn't tell him the main reason, because if you told someone that a fictional cartoon pony was your daughter, they'd call you a lunatic, senile, crazy and so forth. I wouldn't have cared anyway, I'm basically at my mind's end.
The third day I had finally went to work. But I was busy isolating myself from everyone that I was a mute throughout that entire day. My boss was worried about my health, and Tina too, yet I neglected their concerns because I dared not to have them get involved with my dilemma.
The fourth to the sixth day weren't any different, so I will omit them to spare a page of my diary.
However, the seventh day of the week had to be my re-attempt at watching the show. Before I had gone to bed for the seventh day I had my alarm set for 5:30AM -- thirty minutes prior to the show's schedule -- so that it'd be my new day-by-day schedule.
At 5:55AM I had my shower and clothes on and waited for 'My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic' to be aired after 'Littlest Pet Shop'. Barely do I understand about the pet shop gimmick being a cartoon show, I mean, if you look further into it there's really nothing too identical between the toys and the show. But I digress.
Soon 'My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic' begun with its harmonious theme and I sat through the intro until it actually started. When the show started however, all I saw was nothing but pure blackness on the big screen. And suddenly a face appeared - a face I never would have expected....
Princess Celestia's face.
DUN DUN DUN lol it say it goes suddenly black and then celestia's face appears reminds me of slender lol
BUCKING CLIFFHANGER
oh and
Shit...Just...Got...Real!
hmmmmmm well played.
2264771 In the comments below (unless you have Oldest First instead of Newest First) I had already explained about this story being a rendition to the original. Yes, there were either a few or several lines stolen, but recreations end up that way sometimes. I am a bit shamed for writing a rip-off from the original (like many others you interpreted), but my one BIG reason I did this was because, as said in my latest blog post, My Little Dashie inspired me to become a writer (And from what you can already tell I'm not an expert) and I felt that I should upload it as a gratitude. I think I'll add that to the description, actually.
I can't say anything that'll change the fact about this story. And at least you commented with a critique that, later at a point, will help remind me how much harder I must do for my future chapters or such.
There kind of is one thing I might add if it serves any important purpose; this was my very first fanfic. Sadly it had to be a recreation.... Anyways, thanks for giving this story a fair review.
DAYM!!
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