Yes, I deleted all the comments. I figured a fresh start on this thing would help a bit. I would get rid of that rating too, but Fimfiction laughed at me and said no. (well, not exactly, but you get the point)
Not sure if pun on popstar, or just a pornstar. Probably the latter, so I guess Nurse Redheart was short on bits. Few errors in grammar, but they're mostly minor, so don't impact on the story too much, which I'm really enjoying :) Look forward to more.
Yes, I deleted all the comments. I figured a fresh start on this thing would help a bit. I would get rid of that rating too, but Fimfiction laughed at me and said no. (well, not exactly, but you get the point)
3922554 Fresh start indeed, I like the little extras you added in the edits.
3923737 Well, thanks! Glad to see it's getting some feedback.
Tags R Us over here... Nah but I'm really looking forward to reading this, I just have such a long reading list already
3943133 Derpy riding a velociraptor and holding an RPG while something awesome explodes in the background.
I think your argument may be invalid.
Not sure if pun on popstar, or just a pornstar. Probably the latter, so I guess Nurse Redheart was short on bits.
Few errors in grammar, but they're mostly minor, so don't impact on the story too much, which I'm really enjoying :) Look forward to more.
I caugth that closing time reference