Reading this chapter again for the second time gave me the same feeling it did the first time. Very somber but I noticed that once again, there was more emphasis on Xero's interaction with Lumens and his feelings about it. Shame about what will happen later on.

Now, for the errors:

muscular, but not cubby. Just... big boned. -chubby

‘You’re still here? I thought you would have left down by now,’ -town

Storm had told me yester she had made a contract with the her, whatever that was suppose to mean.-yesterday.

Also, the dialogue for Lumens and Xero in between the diary entries are in italics instead of the normal text. Same goes for the text afterwards.

5433309 Many thanks for those fixes. This chapter is friggin netorioius for those screwy italics (this is actually the fifth time the chapter has been posted, between the first time I wrote it over a year ago and now). All I can say is that I'm glad the later chapters use a whole lot less of the italics.