Scootaloo's got a dark secret, and that's okay. Until she starts hanging out with a boy.
Mister Sun Dancer and Missus Rain Dancer.Best parents ever.
Wait. What?
A lot of the anatomy terms you use are those of humans, which implies anthro. Perhaps you should consider revising for more consistency.
Gingerly, Rumble shook that hoof. “Okay. So we’re aiming for the Little Ace competition. First two weeks we practise the basics, second two weeks we practise a routine, and then we get Rainbow Dash to see what she thinks.”
They have 8 weeks what about the last 2
Wait. What?
A lot of the anatomy terms you use are those of humans, which implies anthro. Perhaps you should consider revising for more consistency.
Gingerly, Rumble shook that hoof. “Okay. So we’re aiming for the Little Ace competition. First two weeks we practise the basics, second two weeks we practise a routine, and then we get Rainbow Dash to see what she thinks.”
They have 8 weeks what about the last 2