5385457 Well, you can't really blame them: it's been on hold for two years, and then uploaded in a bunch. And yes, Home Remedy is something I feel very clever for.
Catchy musical numbers are cold comfort when your entire invasion force drops into a coma within ten seconds of breaking through the shield dome because the defenders are deploying Mustard Gas err Ling-Nip en-masse, largely because your queen fucked up a job that a high school drama student could have a reasonable chance of doing.
5385952 5385742 Could you not do this on my story, please? Alanith, you are replying to an in-story sentence said to a fictional character. You were not replying to a statement made by the author. The reason they do not deploy the 'nip currently is stated in the story: it's a health hazard, and the changelings have long-since devised a counter-measure that makes it poisonous to ponies as well, ensuring mutual destruction. Added to that, some ponies have a natural allergy to it, making it a health hazard. Also, changelings are intelligent creatures, and it's considered a war crime, much like the chemical warfare you're comparing it to. Changelings aren't even considered as being that dangerous, not naturally. This was all stated in the story. Regarding the invasion itself, ponies did not know it was changelings who were going to be doing the attacking in the first place, for whatever reason.
The fanfic needs to have the invasion make sense in order to work. If you think it doesn't make sense at all and you don't like the story for that, then I kindly invite you to check out some other stories that may be more to your liking, because there's no way I can compensate for a sentiment like that if all the above still isn't enough. If you want to go on about how badly my story was written, go right ahead. I'll see what I can do with the criticism. If you want to go on about how badly you think Canterlot Wedding was written... yeah, I'm gonna have to stop you there. This isn't the place for that, it's going to degenerate, and it serves no purpose other than distracting people from the actual story.
Q-Burt, I appreciate it, but don't reply to that sort of thing. Nothing good can come of it.
5389397 I've said this before and I'll say it again: this story is linked to Duellum Telum. The scene is in that story. I know it's poor, but this is how it turned out. It was either this or copy-paste an entire scene into two stories, which already happened when the changeling introduced himself.
This is how the story turned out, and given that it's a collab I can't go back and edit now. What's wrong now will stay wrong, basically.
5389397 No worries. The prologues were posted two years early, so can't really expect people to remember it. Or new readers to notice if they only have short descriptions to base on.
5390220 Huh. I saw that in the Google Doc of it, too, but I corrected it there. Either I missed it, or the Document didn't update properly. Anyhoof, thanks for the heads-up. Should be corrected now.
A plague of Zompony Foals is upon us!
And given how ponies react to new and exciting events, the hospital is probably the most likely place for her to be murdered.
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Well, you can't really blame them: it's been on hold for two years, and then uploaded in a bunch. And yes, Home Remedy is something I feel very clever for.
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Catchy musical numbers are cold comfort when your entire invasion force drops into a coma within ten seconds of breaking through the shield dome because the defenders are deploying
Mustard Gaserr Ling-Nip en-masse, largely because your queen fucked up a job that a high school drama student could have a reasonable chance of doing.5385952
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Could you not do this on my story, please? Alanith, you are replying to an in-story sentence said to a fictional character. You were not replying to a statement made by the author. The reason they do not deploy the 'nip currently is stated in the story: it's a health hazard, and the changelings have long-since devised a counter-measure that makes it poisonous to ponies as well, ensuring mutual destruction. Added to that, some ponies have a natural allergy to it, making it a health hazard. Also, changelings are intelligent creatures, and it's considered a war crime, much like the chemical warfare you're comparing it to. Changelings aren't even considered as being that dangerous, not naturally. This was all stated in the story. Regarding the invasion itself, ponies did not know it was changelings who were going to be doing the attacking in the first place, for whatever reason.
The fanfic needs to have the invasion make sense in order to work. If you think it doesn't make sense at all and you don't like the story for that, then I kindly invite you to check out some other stories that may be more to your liking, because there's no way I can compensate for a sentiment like that if all the above still isn't enough. If you want to go on about how badly my story was written, go right ahead. I'll see what I can do with the criticism. If you want to go on about how badly you think Canterlot Wedding was written... yeah, I'm gonna have to stop you there. This isn't the place for that, it's going to degenerate, and it serves no purpose other than distracting people from the actual story.
Q-Burt, I appreciate it, but don't reply to that sort of thing. Nothing good can come of it.
EXPLOSIVE TELEPORT SKILL ACTIVATED!
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I've said this before and I'll say it again: this story is linked to Duellum Telum. The scene is in that story. I know it's poor, but this is how it turned out. It was either this or copy-paste an entire scene into two stories, which already happened when the changeling introduced himself.
This is how the story turned out, and given that it's a collab I can't go back and edit now. What's wrong now will stay wrong, basically.
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No worries. The prologues were posted two years early, so can't really expect people to remember it. Or new readers to notice if they only have short descriptions to base on.
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Huh. I saw that in the Google Doc of it, too, but I corrected it there. Either I missed it, or the Document didn't update properly. Anyhoof, thanks for the heads-up. Should be corrected now.
Ok, intresting, i would enjoy mor soon because of the sheer deph of it.
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British English.
A couple years ago she’d have run for an hour to get home to my room.
Correction:A couple years ago she’d have run for an hour to get home to her room.
*Everything clicks.*
Rumble has a love parasite from the book Scootaloo couldn't get into. WHY DIDN'T I SEE THIS SOONER???