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HO MAI
Vinyl Scratch and Octavia.
And you split them.
I fucking hate you.
367493 lolwut?
I lied.
You put them together.
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THAR.
And I love you more for it.
367504 Uh...
Okay?
Thank you?
Aw, who am I kidding!
Thanks!
367702 i wish you could see my face right now.
Oh wait, you can!!
:pinkiehappy
Yay! Only a few chapters until my OC shows up.
364871
... ummm, lolwut?
368321 Was that directed at the HO MAI or the RD eating me bit?
368460
The part where Gylden explained Gammel Hjerte's personalities...
368522 Oh, yes. THAT CONFUSED ME, ALSO.
368574
lol
'Does that make sense?'
Twilight: YES!
Me:ummm
Twilight: 'Really, Metall?' *launches into an explanation*
Me: OH GOD PLEASE NO! NO! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
368767 Quick! Hide in my air-conditioned werewolf assault tank! You can use the built in frappacino maker!
368769
Frappacino maker?
ASSAULT TANK!? SWEET!
*sees Twilight running up to give me the lecture*
FUUUUUUUUUUUUUCK NOOOOOOOO!
*jumps inside tank*
safe... I hope
Dees Chaptah is Giggity.
FROST!
Bless your face, if you sneezed during this chapter bless you, peace off.
u mentioned tech at first I was like wat vynil like tech then im like oh she like the work he does you do realize that all he does is be a technician of sorts you know work on elevators motors gears that stuff oh well off to neverland (Violent form) violence
368784 Watch out for the flamethrower controls.
Oh, and check and see how many Cuban cigars are left in that there humidor.
I wonder what will happen next...
369001
FUCK NO! 'GIGGITY' AND 'BOW CHICKA WOW WOW' ARE MY LINES!
MY NAME IS CROWN8, AND YOU HAVE STOLEN MY LINES! PREPARE TO DIE!
369924
Flamethrower controls? sure...
Lets see, cuban cigars... there's 2 left!
*Throws one to Chuckles and lights one for myself*
371003 Wait... there were three...
FUCK! RAINBOW DASH! STAY OUTTA MAH TANK!
371009
Wow, really?
She has nerve...
Oh and by the way I'm replying in Chemistry class :D
Yep, online at FIMFiction during Chemistry
371082 Like.
A.
Chemist.
I said that when I was caught up with th' story and you still needed a proofreader, i'd do it. Whelp, i just finished. Still need a proofreader?
372406 DAYUM.
Definitely.
When I finish this next chapter, I'll send you the link and pass.
371285
DAYYYYYYYYYYYYUMMMMMMMMMMM RIGHT, BIIIIIIIIIITCCCCCCCCCCCCH!!!
Ugh. I feel shitty, now. I'm quite an empathic person... When my friends feel bad, I feel fucking horrible.
372412 mmnkay!
WOOT it's back up!!!
412721 no...
How the fuck...did you comment on my story...
When I haven't submitted it yet?
Are you a ninja?
Or did I give you the password?
415235
You gave me the password about... a week ago I think, maybe more. I proof read one of your chapters, it had Scratch and Octavia.
Anyway I saw on the group page the story description and it had "OMG IT IS BACK FROM THE DEAD". So I just assumed that is was.
/wave
Just here to update the character list for when it gets put back up.
Yes, you did give me the password. Felt like saying hi.
Soo...hi.
Now, to work!
458978
And you couldn't have just messaged me?
Anyway, hello to you as well, Mr. Endertj.
Hello Mr. Cancelled, welcome-
No. Seriously...
Fuck you, Mr. Cancelled.
And I was so looking forward to the ending...
491432 It be a test of wills.
I'll explain on Steam, tomorrow.
491449 Understood. Talk to you then.
In the meantime, I'm going to miss this story.
491458 ...It's back up, ye werewolf blind person.
I put it back up.
491463 What are ye talkin' about, ye crazy zebra?!
TROLOLOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
wat u guyz meen password?
I dun need one
I just clicked on CoC from my favourites and BOOP, here it is...
BACK FROM TEH DEAD!!!!!
YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
497079 ...
Did you not see my blogpost?
Where I said it's back up?
Surprise, surprise.
499482
Everyone else was talking about a password...
..confused
552712
So there is Pauli's Exclusion rule, Hunds rule and... The aufbau principle, wasn't it?
I've already forgotten what they are lol
555223 Well, I didn't really think any of it out.
I was just like: "Idea! Fuck any logic!"
So, yeah.
If you don't like it, you have every right to criticize it.
Also, you need to realize that I'm not writing this as if I'm some world genius.
No, rather, it's what Peter Roose perceives.
Of course, there's a lot more at play here than what he managed to get down, and the nuclear meltdown stuff is totally impossible.
But it's from his point of view, not mine. It's how he perceives it, and his miscalculations, misjudgements, and his lack of actual information.
Trust me, there's a shitload of more stuff at play in that small bit, but Peter Roose either doesn't know about it, or forgets to mention it.
I am familiar with the writing concept of the unreliable narrator, but when the narrator in question believes things which don't make much logical sense, I have to either question his intelligence or his sanity. The level to which the narrator gets things wrong makes me believe that that part of the story wasn't thought out as completely as it could have been, because it basically reads as, and bear in mind I'm paraphrasing here,
"fuck our government, fuck Obama, fuck nuclear power, you know what, just fuck everybody."
That last part is really odd too, because it's almost like the narrator realizes at the last second he's kind of being an unrealistic dickweed about the whole situation because he's like...
"I'm not trying to say that EVERYTHING and EVERYONE is made of shit, just such a significant fraction that I can find no way of fixing it, so peace out fuckers."
But like I said his motivations for being in Equestria are largely irrelevant, because he basically jumped into the portal and zipped it shut behind him. You could have literally said the future is made of murder and giant rape demons that fly around and do questionable things to the orifaces of everyone they catch, and since the narrator would like to keep his orifaces nice and virginal Elvis has left the building thank you very much. It would have had the same result, and unless the future is going to start spewing rape demons into Equestria it doesn't matter what happens there because it's a completely different universe.
You've moved on in the narrative, and good on you.
560890 Yeah, it was just SOTP. Nothing really actually thought out or made into a three dimensional concept until much later.
So, yeah.
Muffins.