2582121 Not really sure, I'm working on another story right now that will have this oh so mysterious Hatter in it. And Jester was kind of a more serious version of him. Thats right, serious
2582354 Well, think of the Jester and Hatter as like different reincarnations of the Doctor. They're all the same person, yet they represent different versions of the first. Still haven't come up with the full plot line though.
I've just finished reading the story. A few complaints easily appear in my mind: here =/= hear, for an example. But you should know, small grammatical/spelling errors (sometimes incomplete sentences) are easy for me to overlook. Reason being is that I just simply enjoy the story so far.
Though, since you asked in a few chapters, I shall list a few questions for you (blargh) to review and answer (though I expect no response): hopefully to spark some creativity in your mind to help you fabricate ideas to then convert them into the literate visualization of your choosing or to refine the ones already in existence. Your choice, either way I'm just happy to oblige by your asking of questions 1. Do you plan on borrowing more "deadly" creatures from the show (timber wolves, manticore, etc) or put to use other known mythological creatures, maybe even an original creature(s)? 2. Do you plan on having more elaboration on as to how a storm can cause a "god" of chaos access, trapped in the "Zoid," access to humans? 3. Would you agree that Jacob either needs a reloader or a swordsmanship training flashback if he runs out of ammo? 4. Exactly how sexy is Jacob? Like scale 1-10. *poker face* 4.5 *actual 4*. I don't see Celestia going horn over hooves for the vagabond human in "rags." I suppose this question four does relate to the other question four as appearances might have a factor. Jacob seems to have a good(?) enough personality, but is Celestia into beasality(??) and more importantly: is Jacob into that(???)? To put condense this question: can the love of Celestia and Jacob, really be? 5. Jacob's personality: where's the corruption from the years of living in a wasteland? At the moment, Jacob feels to soft in most of his interractions. Of course I realise it has been stated that Jacob knows and understands how to socially express himself: I just feel like he would still be acting, at least a little bit, different than what he is now. 6. Does Jacob seem like to kind of guy to join a crowd of ponies and not just watch from afar? I feel as if Jacob would be smarter than to join a crowd that's in the open and has been portrayed smarter due to the things he (proably) has gone through in his past. It's usually a good idea to think of what a character would be doing in a the given situation before writing what you would do. But who knows, maybe you wanted Jacob to be silly like that: possibly the little bit of alcohol did something after all? 7. Is Jacob planning on clubbing Pinkie, in her sleep with a large stick for the pure purpose of pain and suffering on Pinkie's part? 8. Is Jacob planning on clubbing Luna, in her sleep with a large stick just because he can? 9. Is Jacob planning on clubbing Celestia, in her sleep with a large stick in the least sexual way possible? 10. Is Jacob planning on clubbing Spike, in his sleep with a large stick in the most sexual way possible? Small text for compression! (edit: didn't work, damn)
Nice chapter. There doesn't seem to be many errors in this anyway since it's a short chapter. Keep up the good work
My mind is blown. Is this guy gonna be a regular occurrence, or is this just a filler?
2582121
Not really sure, I'm working on another story right now that will have this oh so mysterious Hatter in it. And Jester was kind of a more serious version of him. Thats right, serious
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if the hatter can jump threw dimensions and universes then.. wouldn't that mean they are likely to never find each other?
ARGHH....SO.........MANY..........REFERENCES.. ....
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Well, think of the Jester and Hatter as like different reincarnations of the Doctor. They're all the same person, yet they represent different versions of the first. Still haven't come up with the full plot line though.
Oh, so that's the guy that's been fucking with mah' head lately? Well, I can forgive em'. He seems pretty cool. DAMN YOU LITTLE VOICE! SHUT UP!
So is he looking for the Mad Hatter, or someone else?
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Well it's not the Mad Hatter in the Wonderland sense, I guess you could say this is my perception of the mad hatter.
Apples taste like carrots
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USE THIS
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thanks!
I've just finished reading the story.
A few complaints easily appear in my mind: here =/= hear, for an example. But you should know, small grammatical/spelling errors (sometimes incomplete sentences) are easy for me to overlook. Reason being is that I just simply enjoy the story so far.
Though, since you asked in a few chapters, I shall list a few questions for you (blargh) to review and answer (though I expect no response): hopefully to spark some creativity in your mind to help you fabricate ideas to then convert them into the literate visualization of your choosing or to refine the ones already in existence. Your choice, either way I'm just happy to oblige by your asking of questions
1. Do you plan on borrowing more "deadly" creatures from the show (timber wolves, manticore, etc) or put to use other known mythological creatures, maybe even an original creature(s)?
2. Do you plan on having more elaboration on as to how a storm can cause a "god" of chaos access, trapped in the "Zoid," access to humans?
3. Would you agree that Jacob either needs a reloader or a swordsmanship training flashback if he runs out of ammo?
4. Exactly how sexy is Jacob? Like scale 1-10. *poker face*
4.5 *actual 4*. I don't see Celestia going horn over hooves for the vagabond human in "rags." I suppose this question four does relate to the other question four as appearances might have a factor. Jacob seems to have a good(?) enough personality, but is Celestia into beasality(??) and more importantly: is Jacob into that(???)? To put condense this question: can the love of Celestia and Jacob, really be?
5. Jacob's personality: where's the corruption from the years of living in a wasteland? At the moment, Jacob feels to soft in most of his interractions. Of course I realise it has been stated that Jacob knows and understands how to socially express himself: I just feel like he would still be acting, at least a little bit, different than what he is now.
6. Does Jacob seem like to kind of guy to join a crowd of ponies and not just watch from afar? I feel as if Jacob would be smarter than to join a crowd that's in the open and has been portrayed smarter due to the things he (proably) has gone through in his past. It's usually a good idea to think of what a character would be doing in a the given situation before writing what you would do. But who knows, maybe you wanted Jacob to be silly like that: possibly the little bit of alcohol did something after all?
7. Is Jacob planning on clubbing Pinkie, in her sleep with a large stick for the pure purpose of pain and suffering on Pinkie's part?
8. Is Jacob planning on clubbing Luna, in her sleep with a large stick just because he can?
9. Is Jacob planning on clubbing Celestia, in her sleep with a large stick in the least sexual way possible?
10. Is Jacob planning on clubbing Spike, in his sleep with a large stick in the most sexual way possible?
Small text for compression! (edit: didn't work, damn)