ATTENTION ALL READERS. *Clears throat* I NEED QUESTIONS ABOUT STORY! that is all.
Oh! During the answering I will also post which lucky mare will have a chance to fall in love with Jacob, so please; ask questions. The faster you ask, the faster it can be done.
Will him being from a post-apocalypic earth have much bearing on future events?
How far into the future is this set? (I remember something about the jackets growing with the wearer, that seems pretty futuristic)
Has him being a pariah among humans caused his social skills to be quite rusty? I can't imagine that he would be used to dealing with normal people that don't fear him because of his job.
edit* ... I just realized that you put the latest chapter before this...
I've been making plans for my own story of this kind for a while and it kind of split into like... four separate ideas. I'm going to try and get a bit more writing experience before I set to making it though.
Anyway, I love stories in this setting and your cover art was something that caught my eye, probably because it was in this very appropriately named song:
That sounds like a good idea, the first story I ever wrote was a piece of crap. Though it wasn't like this one, I got a lot of destructive criticism for it. So I was in a bit of a depression for a while. Finally when I was about to release this, I was very hesitant and asked questions like "What if nobody liked this?" and such. So my advice is learn from other fanfictions.
No great walls of text, make it easy for people to tell who is talking, things like that.
Oh, and awesome song, I might actually use it for the story; if you don't mind that is.
2318301 I know, I mean thank you for the song. Never really heard of Two steps from hell, I have a feeling for all my awesome scenes I might use a song from them.
2318301 I know, I mean thank you for the song. Never really heard of Two steps from hell, I have a feeling for all my awesome scenes I might use a song from them.
2315865 is this set in any specific universe? I would like to know so if I have knowledge of said universe or I don't I can look it up so I know about the lore in it. by the picture and description it makes me think of a combination between fallout and STALKER.
2318343 Chances are that you probably have heard some of their songs before. People often use them for trailers. If I had to make a recommendation, I would say 'Heart of Courage'. It's probably one of their best, at least in my opinion.
2318387 Don't get me wrong, they do seem like cowboys, but in fact; especially in the towns, they have technology that cowboys never had. Plus they don't use things like lever-action rifles and such. They have modern or at least more modern weapons such as 9mm pistols, USAS shotguns, things like that. It's by mere coincidence that Jacob has his revolver. But that's a chapter for another time.
Oh, an I think you're right about that. Sorry, I'm trying my best to tie things together and it can some times get jumbled, but you ARE right about the cowboys in the 1800's, the thing is though that after the bombs dropped there was no known data that showed the actual time period, so Jacob is only guessing about a thousand years ago.
one does not simply, deny pinkie pie from breaking the 4th wall
2301554
Your right, but that doesn't mean I can't try *Glares at Pinkie*
*Pinkie glares back*
2301793
K, and I needed to go kill myself because bad pun is bad.
OCTAVIA!
2301848 OCTAVIA!
2301849 OCTAVIA!
2301845
Tyler, posting Octavia over and over isn't going to get you more than one vote.
2301852 Okay fine then.....but.........OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA! OCTAVIA!
2301856
Pinkie, hand me... the cakenator.
"WHAT!? But...but...."
Now.
*Pinkie hands Blargl over-sized bazooka that has three lasers aiming at Bobbob's head.
2301725 *Gives you eye drops so you can glare longer* sorry Pinkie, i gots to help mah bro out.
well he ever use his gas mask again?
eh... who needs sanity?
ATTENTION ALL READERS. *Clears throat*
I NEED QUESTIONS ABOUT STORY!
that is all.
Oh! During the answering I will also post which lucky mare will have a chance to fall in love with Jacob, so please; ask questions. The faster you ask, the faster it can be done.
Ok, here are some questions for ya
How long do you see this story going for?
Will him being from a post-apocalypic earth have much bearing on future events?
How far into the future is this set? (I remember something about the jackets growing with the wearer, that seems pretty futuristic)
Has him being a pariah among humans caused his social skills to be quite rusty? I can't imagine that he would be used to dealing with normal people that don't fear him because of his job.
edit* ... I just realized that you put the latest chapter before this...
2318199
Thank you! Okay so I'm gonna edit the chapter now. THANK YOU!
2318204
No problemo
I've been making plans for my own story of this kind for a while and it kind of split into like... four separate ideas. I'm going to try and get a bit more writing experience before I set to making it though.
Anyway, I love stories in this setting and your cover art was something that caught my eye, probably because it was in this very appropriately named song:
Great work so far, and keep going!
2318235
That sounds like a good idea, the first story I ever wrote was a piece of crap. Though it wasn't like this one, I got a lot of destructive criticism for it. So I was in a bit of a depression for a while. Finally when I was about to release this, I was very hesitant and asked questions like "What if nobody liked this?" and such. So my advice is learn from other fanfictions.
No great walls of text, make it easy for people to tell who is talking, things like that.
Oh, and awesome song, I might actually use it for the story; if you don't mind that is.
2318261
It's not mine, belongs to the awesome Two Steps From Hell so I'm fine with it being shared.
2318301
I know, I mean thank you for the song. Never really heard of Two steps from hell, I have a feeling for all my awesome scenes I might use a song from them.
2318301
I know, I mean thank you for the song. Never really heard of Two steps from hell, I have a feeling for all my awesome scenes I might use a song from them.
2315865
is this set in any specific universe? I would like to know so if I have knowledge of said universe or I don't I can look it up so I know about the lore in it. by the picture and description it makes me think of a combination between fallout and STALKER.
2318343
Chances are that you probably have heard some of their songs before. People often use them for trailers.
If I had to make a recommendation, I would say 'Heart of Courage'. It's probably one of their best, at least in my opinion.
2318387
Don't get me wrong, they do seem like cowboys, but in fact; especially in the towns, they have technology that cowboys never had. Plus they don't use things like lever-action rifles and such. They have modern or at least more modern weapons such as 9mm pistols, USAS shotguns, things like that. It's by mere coincidence that Jacob has his revolver. But that's a chapter for another time.
Oh, an I think you're right about that. Sorry, I'm trying my best to tie things together and it can some times get jumbled, but you ARE right about the cowboys in the 1800's, the thing is though that after the bombs dropped there was no known data that showed the actual time period, so Jacob is only guessing about a thousand years ago.
2318459 I've only read the first 2 chapters, but I was wondering if the Dead man is all disfigured and mutated like the gouls from Fallout?
2318543
keep reading and you'll find out.
2318715
Like I said, it is meant to be perceived as a mere estimate, not exactly.
2319530
Yeah, I was surprised too. But apparently Celestia won.
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Hey Adam its me
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2319998
Hello there Nomar. I see you like ponies now.
Adam no...
My job is to spam you
You will have no more sleep
Prepare to die
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